RAW: /s/f3774e0bc1/842125-21
*Update: fix typos on page 17 and 21
*Update #2: fixed many places as your feedback (except the "s" behind "pretend" on pg. 37; it's "always" so there'e no "s"). And holy shit, how could I forget pg. 39? I'll be damned. Really sorry about that.

A friend of mine really like Sanagi's work, so I tried translate this, but I need to say something:
This is my second translation. My Japanese is not that good, English isn't my first language neither. And Sanagi didn't use a single goddamn period. Not a single one. So those fuck-long sentences became even more complicate with all the Hiragana and Katakana messing up each others, to the point I have to guess the meaning based on Kanji. So some (spell: many) parts can be wrong and stupid. Please point out any part you find stupid and I'll try to fix it.

Also, redrawing was a bitch.

Translator's Note: On page 11, that dude called her "Ibukino" (with 1 extra Kanji), while her name is "Ibuno" on other pages. I decided to leave it be as in the raw.

The scanlation feels alright.

There is a typo on page 17 (= manga page 37) "pertend" should be "pretend".

On page 21 (42) she says Gadai-san. A typo?

Edit: Oh, that was fast! Keep the good stuff coming.
Err, moonflow is fine. No "mister" please.

Last edited on 05 September 2015, 11:25.

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Great work bro. The translation was smooth. I love this artist's arty style, very clean and the girls all look lewd and amazing.

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Hahaha, hentai is so silly! Those absurd plots. I am not even complaining because I enjoy every one of them. It's our world, the hentai world! Welcome!

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that what i waiting for
Thx

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It's done, Mr. moonflow . Those typos have been dealt with. I doubt if someone would ever see them and their family again.

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That reference on the last page.

I am sad now.

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oh yeah piss off a guy that can lift you up with one hand you fatass, that will end fine for you

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@loltwat
Heh, I noticed that too

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Page 5 (p025.jpg) "doesn't seem to be interest" should be "doesn't seem to be interested".
page 9 (p029.jpg) "how can I fell" should be "how could I fall".
page 13 (p033.jpg) "feels even better" should be "feel even better".
page 15 (p035.jpg) "you was" should be "you were".

thanks for the translation :)

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More on page 17 (manga page 37):
"I drink a little by surprise" -> "I drank a little by surprise"
"pretend to be ernest" -> "pretends to be earnest" (or maybe "pretended", I'd have to see the raw to be sure)

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Well that was brutal

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>Sanagi didn't use a single goddamn period

I'm guessing you don't read much hentai manga? That's par for the course around here.

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And after page 24, the protagonist beat the fat guy within an inch of his life, the girl regained her memories, and the protagonist and girl became a couple and fucked happily ever after.
Would this stll be considered NTR? The guy said they weren't even going out... At most they were probably childhood friends

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It's better not to think about what happens after the ending, because that's probably where the fat guy's dreams become memes...

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@instant_noodle: Thank you for translations.
And I guess I have to thank your friend too, If it is not because of him, we won't see this translation :h

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Well considering this is NTR hentai, instead up beating up the fat dude, the MC most likely would just fall to his knees in shock, lose his confidence and become socially withdrawn or something because his dick's smaller than the other dude's. Because only in the world of NTR hentai is the cock mightier than the sword.

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Can this be even called ntr?They weren't even together and she lost her memory, at least half so i wonder if there is tag for memory loss if so then it should be tagged as such.

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Did that guy just lift a small planet with one hand?!! pg.3

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This is why you don't let fat guys play sports, they can't aim for shit.

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There needs to be a netori tag to differentiate netori and netorare. Just sayin'.

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I usually dislike netorare and will avoid it like the devil, but it's pleasing to see a white-knight get NTRd for some reason.

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Perfect NTR Lv +Infinite detected

That white-knight deserved that ending

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@XCX Scans: this is not netori

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I thought the fat dude looked adorable.

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What's the reference of last page?

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Ntr'd by a ball

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grammar nazi in hentai manga lol

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I am pretty you can't do that to a guy who can lift you effortlessly.... XD

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Hang yourself already cucks and author

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And the moral of the story is: "Always keep photoshopped pictures of the girls you like at arms length in case they should get amnesia."

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I like the girl's fu *king face!~(22p)

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