http://thetsuuyaku.blogspot.com/2015/10/shinoburedo-chi.html?zx=3c5dee0f3f2085c6

Uhh.. Wow... This took a heavy turn for the worst...

Did not expect this at all from Z-Ton after the last part. Definitely a sad ending to this all.

Went from happy to just heart broken.

@Yesman71 - We know the kind of stories he produce, its that he set us up pretty hard for such a fall. After the series breeding for a new era or something like that, it was nice to see a multipart series with a nice outcome over generations. This one, the last one was so kind and sweet and then BAM, outta nowhere its like get owned pansies. I mean, i still like Zton a lot, it was just... unexpected

Last edited on 03 October 2015, 13:57.

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Thanks Deathstrike and thetsuuyaku.. It's kinda unusual to see this type plot from Z-ton. well maybe because they are ninja?

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Talk about a real kick to the balls

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Lmfao double ntr! Somewhere Batman must be reading this.

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So... this is how NTR get passed on?

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>Get NTR'd
>Become a Master Ninja.

OK then...

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Don't enjoy NTR (nor the common cliches) but I liked the storytelling in this more than the typical NTR.

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That was good, wish for a sequel with him managing to impregnate that new bat girl.

Expecting hard core vanilla lovers to dislike this comment. :'D

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The tank has two extra pages at the end with some talk about the batgirls I believe.

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You know I kinda expected this to happen, so I didn't rage when I read it.
Batgirl went with Batman instead of the puny robin heh.

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Z-ton has been moving towards the off stuff from the vanilla, so not surprising....

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Wait, what?

What the fuck??

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disappointingly

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Wow yall are so butthurt over NTR. Look guys, artists don't write NTR to tell you to fuck off, some people like it. On top of him being unlikely to read your comments, you're not even paying him to read this, the fuck you get to complain about? If you think he's some vanilla writer, you're terribly mistaken. Practically all his works involve the female succumbing to pleasure. Hell, limb legion was about a guy raping a loli squid girl, impregnating her, and contemplating breeding enough hybrids to inherit humanity.

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So why does this have one of the gallery warnings when there's no guro or scat?

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Snuff gets a warning too.

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and so the cycle of NTR repeats endlessly

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Master who arranged to NTR one student & planned to rape another in order to 'teach a lesson': Taken out by a bat.
Superior student who excelled and was kind: Raped, attempted raped by master, watched Master defeated, betrays lover, raped, mind broken.
Student who needs more training: 2x NTR, betrayed by Master & lover, LEVEL UP!
Random rival Bat clan ninja who actually gathered intel, infiltrated, and executed mission: Takes prize.

Lesson? Always check the quality of your dojo.

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thank you very much

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Saw it coming but still kinda heart breaking, The ending wouldn't bother me so much if the disciple didn't keep this tradition going. Wish he was smart enough to break the cycle.

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NANANANANANANANANANANANANANANANA BATMAN!

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And so the cycle continues...

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NTRception.

Yo dawg, Heard you liked NTR so I put NTR in your NTR...

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>Get Physically NTR'd by old fat guy
>Get Physically and Emotionally NTR'd by random bat guy
>Conspire to one day NTR a bat girl from her childhood friend as you raise them both
So not just NTR. Not just double NTR. But TRIPLE NTR.

This is kind of fantastic.

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That NTR breeds NTR
But in the end it has to be this way

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I'm left both sad and happy. This is what it took for him to become what he wanted, but lost everything in the process. I can at least think that she came back after mating season to be with him, despite having the other man's child.

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Meh, she's better off with someone of her own kind anyways since they seem to be going extinct. The bat guy is powerful and quite the pretty boy in his human form, not a bad deal for her at all.

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In the end it has to be this way

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Sheeesh, this doesn't surprise me at all; saw it coming all the way. What a way to ruin a story that could've been cute, but oh well, cheat happens.

IMHO, I would say Z-Ton is what I call a bipolar artist(just like AHOBAKA); he either does cute, heartwarming vanilla, or tragic, heartbreaking NTR. Maybe it's to cater two different fanbases, or maybe he gets tired of making the same kind of stories after too long, I dunno. I just wish he sticked to either one per storyline; either make a full NTR from start or started vanilla and stayed like that till the end.

Last edited on 06 October 2015, 03:31.

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Z-ton has really gone downhill.... This is trash.

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Wow, now that was awesome. Started all Vanilla-ish, then it went WAAAAAAAY FAR SOUTH. I really hope there'd be a badass last part where after the guy, Kage I think, ascends to a high level of ninja mastery and ruining a lot of new hopefuls like himself, he starts going "bat-shit" insane and starts killing bat people. Then just dies from the wounds after decapping that last batdude, and the story is told by the next master as a tribute of sorts.

Anyway, that was a fun read. I have read more stacks of NTR in one work than a deck of cards, but this one was unique and fun. Thanks for the share man. That first part set this up quite well.

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Color cover of the bat girl
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NTR is literally *****-tier fetish. At least the scatfags have the common decency to label their shit as offensive to everyone.

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"Just ignore him. He's nothing more than a low-ranking ninja." If you look closely you can actually pinpoint the exact moment his heart breaks in two.

"Mind if I use you?" now THAT is a pick-up line to try and use thanks Z-ton.

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And Ninja bat right out of nowhere! Seriously, who the hell was that and where'd he come from?

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Was the guy in the ceiling the human from the first one right? So he saw everything and just doesn't care considering the way he acts in the last panel.

Edit:So I'm guessing the guy from the first one was in the ceiling and just split and the person in the last page is just a childhood friend that wasn't the original lover in the first., correct? Just wondering where the human from the first one went. Anyone care to weigh in?

Last edited on 25 October 2015, 13:50.

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Sucks for him to lose the biological lottery to be strong

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Yesman argument is retarded. You can dislike cuckold porn and still not be a vanillafag, which is more common than you can think.

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Its the whiplash that makes it sting all the more.

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Too much story in too short a comic. Impressive, but doesn't make for good erotica imo.

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To be honest, this is one of the mildest NTR. There is not much build up of the relationship between those two before the NTR starts. And besides, her ending up with a hunk of her own clan is infinitely better than some sleazebag other NTR titles tend to use.

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And that right here is why you always read the endings of z-ton stories first.
Saves you of stumbling into something you didnt bargain for.

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Sequel would be neat

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I'll never understand why would anyone bother drawing all that if they're just going to shit all over it with such a trash story.
NTR is cancer of hentai.

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