The translation was a bit off on some, especially in chapter 2. That had the worst of the whole piece. But I found Chapter 1 to be the best and easiest to read, whilst Chapter 3 slowly got better from Chapter 2.
Not only is the art good, so is the story. It's interesting and I enjoyed reading it. I do hope there's more and thank you for translating this.
Yeah, I only translated the third chapter, the first two are already availible in English at sexgazer.thecomicseries.com/ . I knew it couln't be a perfect translation, but since it seemed no one else would do it (the author apparently stopped working on this comic sometime 2013) I tried to do my best.
Anyway I fear there won't be any more of this story, the author seems to be doing mostly commisions lately and I think he also worked with Tracy Scops on Spidercest. see: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/sexgazer/profile
Hi. Sexgazer here. Thanks for sharing my old work. Actually, I decided to reboot the story under the name DollHouse. And I've improved my English since then, and also I have some help from my English speakers patrons, so worry not XD I hope you can read it when you have some free time.