An improved and more tedious editing.
Dialogues corrected, clean pages, better handwriting.

And I, I'm still using the google translator.

Thanks to "Telm" by translating and work.

I could not preserve the old gallery, because they are over a year old, and not let me change them.

However, all comments were kept (the obscenities too)

Link
http://www.mediafire.com/download/oxfuiig4u7qr5yo/The+demon+of+gensokyo.+Chapter+04+Goods+and+demons.+For+Tuteheavy+%28English+translation%29+REMAKE.rar

1:Lol.
2: Thank you for this.
3: I feel like page 22 should say "you crushed the competition" rather than "you crushed the competence." As it is now, the sentence does not make sense.

Base +3, tuteheavy +7, Thelightsmen +4, Zelinko -8