Translated by Desudesu
Commissioned by Erokiwi

Doujinshi: http://www.doujinshi.org//book/831744/

Toranoana: http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/32/73/040030327365.html

Melonbooks: https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=132960

OHP: http://b.dlsite.net/RG10218/

Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51650990

Base +6, mootxico +13, mala112 +5, stupid army +7, Rolled +4, Myzer +10, Bane13 +53, MelmothTheWanderer +33

Lmfao that last page monster cock

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Can't possibly argue with all this logic.

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Page 10 to Page 26:
Instead of magically growing breasts, we have magically shrinking penis.

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TY for the TL! This artist sure likes his ahegao's haha. Seems like there's a prequel to this, though, but maybe not.

@ GuroLover12:

Should've used Reinforcement on that :p

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nice share, thank you very much.

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Null Mayu... always good with corruption and mind break. Now in English :p

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I'll try making a coherent review after fapping my brains out.

Hm...

Nope, it's not working. 11/10 6/5 Stars I wish I can give it more.

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LOL, fit fate for Shirou..HAIL NULL!

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"I'll never cum! NEVER!"
"I'm cumming!"

¯ヽ_(ツ)_ノ¯

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People orgasm when they cum!

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@Jycool: if by cum you mean ejaculate then you are wrong, you can cum and not have any orgasm. You failed at the Emiya test! Such a shame! Boo boo!

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Shiro Emiya canonically has a big cock in the VN, not a tiny one, and Souren Araya (from the garden of sinners) is long dead by the point Fate / stay night begins. Not that you can take this story seriously, anyway.

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Wish the VN this is based off of was like this.
wait... is it? I haven't actually played it >u>

Base +7, mootxico +13, Linksaver -6, warellis -7

Nnnngh~ such a good doujinshi!

Base +5, White Remington +8, mootxico +13, mala112 +5, =0w0= +7, Raift +6, kingejn +6, flash193 +8, ranm +7

Ahhh shit, that was very good. Thank you for translating this, I've been waiting for a month! I came all over my beautiful saber figurine ;)

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Is the villain Kotomine?

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@Kruploy No, it's Souren Araya from the garden of sinners / Kara no Kyoukai who is long dead at this point in time.
http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Souren_Araya

Base +4, mootxico +13, dioplodocus +5, extremophile +6, avikdas99 +4, noboi +6, warellis +7

So would Tohsaka's Anus be an appropriate response to this doujin?

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Rin and Saber corrupted into a pair of sadistic, mean-spirited, fawning whores?

Perfect.

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Now we just need Seihai-kun to save the day with his awsome inventions. Psst, that friend maker kit looks fairly useful here :3

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nope, this is boring, the story is rushed, can't helping me building up the flow, the idea already great but like i said, at least make em 3 chapter. but, still love it but still can't fap on em.

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Don't know why jewels(pierced or not) that make you super horny isn't more of a thing in hentai.

Base +5, mootxico +13, White Remington +8, Limited +6, qwerdssa +8, Daanu2 +5, Myzer +10

jajajaja god i love it xD i lose it in page 6

Base +12, mootxico +13

Wow, this is really, really rushed. You can practically see the chapter breaks.

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According to her Pixiv, the artist is some housewife in her 40s.

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As always I always find the last couple of pictures more interesting than the beginning of it. Null Mayu does some really neat femdom stuff.

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The later portions aren't very interesting, but it was certainly fun to watch Souren Araya completely fuck up Fate's mediocre heroines. A fitting fate for Shirou indeed - the proper end of all would-be allies of justice.

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if you feel like supporting the creator of this comic, access to here:
https://www.enty.jp/en/chimosaku

Base +1, mootxico +15, DreamerZero -6, qwerdssa +8

The last bit seems a bit arbitrary. I already know it's NTR so the last bit seems like you're driving the point home just for the sake of doing so. Adding Shirou seemed more like "Shit I have 5 pages left, what can I add? Fuck it, put shirou with a tiny dick in there THAT'LL REALLY GET'EM GOIN."

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You guys are missing the point. The real kicker is the last page reads like it addresses the reader. It's a really impressive mind game.

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wow, no matter how many times I see it, netorare still makes my stomach churn.
Why's it even a thing?

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A common pervert that can to imprison with Rin Tohsaka and Saber is a joke. Only Gilgamesh or Lancer to get this.
Shirou could use her powers of control over Saber to commit suicide and kill Rin.
The pervert is not strong like Caster and his master, the Archer could perfectly save the Rin and the Saber.

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This null maya doujinshi needs a sequel.

Base +6, qwerdssa +8, Illuminati81 +6

Too bad it is so short. It would be bettert if mind break scene last a bit longer. But the panel with begging is worth of reading. Really good h-manga I enjoy a lot.

Base +11, Laurimoz +7, Illuminati81 +6

Need more "corrupted, somewhat evil Saber" stuff.

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