Art by Telsis
http://telsis.deviantart.com/

From publicly posted deviant art page
http://telsis.deviantart.com/gallery/56265901/The-Trophy-Wife

A lot of work went into the graphics and text and I appreciate that, but if the characters had some humanity it would have added an extra dimension! Please look at the works of Shadoman for inspiration. But if this is Telsis thing I'm okay with it.

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In spite of the Moral issue, I can see some people wanting this...ok most people.

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I take what's been said regarding the characters lacking humanity, there will be more of a compassionate human element in part 3 of this tale, when it's done. Part 1 was all about betrayal and revenge so it's hard to empathise with any of the characters or outcomes.

At the end of the part 1 sequence there is a sex scene that's missing from this upload. It can be found on my Tumblr page here http://telsis.tumblr.com/ along with other stuff I can't post at dA and feel free to drop me a line at http://telsis.deviantart.com/

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