Thanks to EdwardCreed for his suggestion! I've set my eyes on that new Makio tank but I doubt I'll be able to work on it until the end of January, so I'll do it if no one else picks that book.

Raws: /g/851893/3b0e7957ab/
Translation/Editing done by me.
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Superb typesetting and font choice.
Good job!

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Now, this is the beginning of a nice incest story.

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People think this is good typesetting? Oh, how standards have fallen.

Page 1:

Font size for all of the boxes is too small
Font face for all of the boxes looks bad scaled down
"inside/my little/sister's" line breaks
"boyfriend" doesn't need to be hyphenated

Page 2:

Never ever ever EVER use serif or sans serif display fonts in dialogue
"her panties for/a little bit..." line breaks
Don't use asterisks for sound effects, use breath marks. Alternatively, use neither like everyone else
Don't need to hyphenate "insides": "your/insides/feel so"
"My image..." box looks bad with the first line so short, should be incredibly easy to fix with most of the words in that box being so small
Don't use four periods in one ellipsis

Every one of these are violations of the most basic rules of typesetting, and this is supposed to be "superb"?

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@wavedash
Thanks for the tips. I never looked much into guides and stuff to know what's standard and what's not in the editing scene, so I'm doing this stuff as I go. I didn't think it was "superb" since this one was especially done without much thought or QC, so, well...
"Font face for all..."
Had no idea how it would turn out when scaled down. An idea to check that now for the future.

"Never ever ever..."
Yeah, could've used a different font there. Just wanted to specify that, apparently, that wasn't a dialogue/thought by the character, but something added by the author/some sort of narrator.

"Four periods..."
Didn't notice there were four periods there, thanks for pointing out.

For everything, I'll keep what you said in mind when working out the typesetting.

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