Made by GlaringDream90 in Tumblr.

Bleh, self-insert OC. Eh, whatever. Can't have everything.

Also, minor nitpick, the final panel is kinda skeezy, especially since *he's* saying it instead of Luna/Celestia. Obviously *he* wants to do that again; it's hotter if the *girls* want to do it again.

Base +7, Not-Phen0xyethanol +3, Ahmenhotep +8

No person in their right mind would run away from a threesome with hot chicks, especially if they are single.

Base +5

I'm pretty sure I'm not the only noticing this, but this art looks a bit... off, in places.

Base +5

The one thing I do love about this is that it's just such pure self-indulgence. Written to please the author and no one else. The fact that you think it's hot can make it hot.

The fact that they made an entire comic on their own is great, and if they keep at it, I bet soon they'll start to be good in other ways.

Base +6

@somnophile: Only if they work on improving the writing. Page one was an utter dialogue disaster. OC insert is obvious, Luna is suddenly a cowardly child because the boy she likes is "a chick magnet", and a dozen other problems. Sword Art Online had less Mary Sue, and Kirito's middle name is "Plot convenience."

Base +17, Ahmenhotep +8

Putting aside that I think it went downhill from page 10,
@ blagblag, blakfayt : I never understand pretentious people like you who can't fap to 'self insert'. I guess some kind of autism prevent you from enjoying that but like, what does pointing that out would archive? Nothing

Base +14