http://hinata-hime34.tumblr.com/

you know even for a cheating based scenario it doesn't make much sense as to how or why this happened? for a forced scenario that was 10 years ago you that look like it was too easy. where's all the dark f***ed up kind of scenario where she'd resist and keep saying no the first few times on the first night as Sasuke just forcing himself onto her? I get what you're aiming for but you may need to watch or read hentai of cheating, NTR, and Nakadashi sorts since this has bad American porn written all over it and takes away the appeal you were aiming for.

if you wanna keep doing this cause it's your fetish and all that I suggest doing your research on the subject first and also work on the facial expressions a bit more since facial exressions for certain scenes are needed to make this believable and helpful and try to keep the bit of plot and story more together.

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Here, let me summarize what people will say on this page.

ABLOO BLOO BLOO NOT CANON
SASUKE MAKES ME ASSHURT DELETE THIS
NOT KEIKAKU
I AM LITERALLY SHAKING YOU TRIGGERED ME

I'll never understand what activates latent autism when it comes to this series on these galleries.

EDIT: I forgot, these kinds of galleries always bring out the TL;DR essays.

Last edited on 17 January 2016, 02:20.

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nothing mor than OoC Bullshit and no Respect for Kishimoto san

and read this

http://animecontinuum.tumblr.com/post/104435607132/english-translation-of-eigas-interview-with

Last edited on 16 January 2016, 20:04.

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"More slutty than Sakura"

that's a good thing

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@WashOxide I knew from the very being about this where naruto relationship with the canon series. Im autistic blaming a group is kinda bold statement to make that was someone with that disable that would make such a thing. This just someone fandub that i have a distaste for but shall not shit on them about this .

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Since when did porn have to respect canon. People can handle Hinata getting raped on a train, but when it's Sasuke, suddenly its teh ooc and no respect for Kishimoto... yall are transparent af.

anyway, Fu-reiji said it best. the scenario is weak and so is the art.

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@ Mishan

people how like an tolerate raping are just sink in there Brains

this Douli ist just Bullshit and teh Artist knows nothig about Hinata or Sasuke

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look in case you ever look at these comments here some basic Naruto NTR, Nakadashi, and cheating doujins that should give you a better grasp on how to handle this genre.

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this Cheating ist just Bullshit even in RTN would Hinata never Cheat on menma und in Shipudden Hinata would never Cheat to Anruto and Sasuke would never Cheat on Sakura

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Lost me at Sasuke-sama. Hokage's wife might have to show respect to a lot of people, but Sasuke is far from one of them.

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This feels like someone used Google Translate

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