japanese version

chinese version /g/749586/2c95e576e9/

somebody translate this into English please and thank you

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Soooooo...which one is the sister? o3o

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sweet! can't wait to see this translated!

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Need to read this.

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So does she stop fucking her father?

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@FarkyMac
The one with short hair in the cover. Then the loli became MC's "imouto".
The slut sister got jealous because she wants all the dicks for her alone.

@bfdbfdbfd
I guess she still does, but wasn't shown because the end of the previous tank caused rage/huge rejection towards the author from fans.

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The rage, for me at least, regarding the end is really because she gives no reason as to why she can't stop fucking her father. Even in the shittiest of NTR or Mindbreak or whatever there's at least a paper thin reason, in this she gives none other than "I can't give it up after all." but...why? Is it too good? Is it because it's your dad? Is it because you get a better thrill? You love your father more? The author IMO gave absolutely no reason for her to suddenly go back at the very end...it's one big 'Fuck You' to the reader, even those who enjoy NTR or betrayal or what-have-you, because it's empty...hollow and serves no other purpose but to meet a status quo(or something).

The whole "It's up for interpretation" doesn't really work because all signs point to "Well looks like the brother got what he wanted." only for the author to go "Nah...he didn't. The End." Hahaha what? If you're going to betray the readers expectations don't just drop it with Zero Allusion to it. It's half-assed lazy and insults the reader for getting invested in any way shape or form. If you wanted to essentially be a Nukige then the story should've reflected that instead of having an overarching plot.

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@Lorisor I agree that the ending sucked and the author should've at least had one more chapter to resolve what happens. One thing I noticed was with the last scene, the father said something along the lines of "everybody is waiting inside" so I assume her father is pimpin her out to gangbangs and knowing how much she loves the D, she can't stop. That's just my interpretation....

Uncensored version. It's in French though, /g/886454/36214fae9e/

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I wish she stayed with the father. I hate when Yui Toshiki has one self-insert-kun getting an disproportional amount of action. My favorite stuff is when he goes full polyamory because it feels super femdomy to have domination to the extent that the girl expects the guys to be okay with her being with other guys.

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