Source: http://j5a4.deviantart.com/gallery/49799080/the-rose-of-life

Brutal story. However the story is way too focused on Pinkie Pie to the point where the other characters might as well not be there.

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WTF !! xD whats going on

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This should be a actual episode

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Translation's a bit off. Otherwise good story. Doesn't really fit in the MLP Fim universe but a good story nonetheless.

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This is seriously the most autistic thing I've ever read, bravo.

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um what is this

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Not Bad
You've done Well

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我的小马驹！！！

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When the dark world impact against the world of laughs and smiles. Wow this sure will change the name to mlp: killing demons is magic.

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HOLY SHIT THIS IS AMAZING
is this canon?
I gotta watch the fucking show

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Very good story.

But yikes! The subsequent chapters pretty much have nothing to do MLP. Ignoring the obvious OC-stuff, pretty much everything other than "ponies" disappear from the story.

Last edited on 31 October 2017, 05:18.

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