Quite readable! My intestines stay inside my body this round, CGRascal!

Yay/10

Base +8, flamedance58 +6, Wilfriback +13, user00 +7, MechWarriorNY +7, amaretto +6, Isolation_Q +6, lilgiudis +6, Vivi1993 +12, Ice_Cream +11, TheYellowDart +6, PrinceVern +6, Zerotaku37 +3, and 6 more...

I think he dodged a bullet there with the pregnancy test.

Base +2, flamedance58 +6, Giangiotto -7, Master E +6, Wilfriback +13, AfromusPrime +6, MechWarriorNY +7, Ice_Cream +11, FemaleHunter +5, war15 -8, Palaxius +33, onlyregistere +12, pond39267 +6, and 8 more...

Hotaru is the most hilarious waifu.

Base +6, flamedance58 +6, cld_bak +6, corruptedcode +6, MechWarriorNY +7, Wilfriback +13, Ice_Cream +11, TheYellowDart +6, FemaleHunter +5, kingejn +6, war15 +8, PrinceVern +6, Quey +6, and 9 more...

BUILT FOR BREEDING

Base +6, zinos6 +8, MechWarriorNY +7, leoshowers +6, Wilfriback +13, AfromusPrime +6, IMNC +6, Lolimir +7, The Naughty Shrink +6, Ice_Cream +11, TheYellowDart +6, Megaton +20, FemaleHunter +5, and 27 more...

The thing I love the most about Dagashi Kashi doujins is that they're nearly all in character. Thanks for the translation!

Base +11, MechWarriorNY +7, Wilfriback +13, IMNC -6, Ice_Cream +11, TheYellowDart +6, PrinceVern +6, FemaleHunter +5, war15 +8, Zerotaku37 +3, VelvetDream +7, pond39267 +6, dj756 +4, and 8 more...

The art was good. I loved hotaru's facial expressions. The plot though seemed a bit off and I couldn't quite figure out why until the end. Then I realized... way to screw up another one CGRascal. I enjoyed the story despite the bad translation but I do fear that quite a bit was lost.

Art 6. Plot 6. Translation 3. True to Character 6. All out of 10.

Base +7, Cillu -8, Deki3765 -6, jessica702 -10, dj756 -6, DJ_Puchuu -13, Henlor -5