Holy shit.

Can anyone say what's going on in this?

EDIT:
Well, if what Gitami said is true, it's not my cup of tea.
I, personally, dislike sluts. I'm more of a pure love guy and all that stuff and this girls seems more like a manipulative bitch than anything else right now.
Especially the scene with the other guy she brought in the guys house to fuck, even if it (maybe) was to make him (the protagonist) have sex with her.

I like Miyabi. He's one of the artist I check up on to see if he released anything new but now I'm not so sure about him.
I liked most of his previous stories but this kind of story is some of the stuff I actively avoid.
Don't get me wrong though. I read all sorts of stuff, including NTR.
And I'm okay with most of it.

I guess this kind of thing is just something that screams "wrong" to me.

Not sure what this means about me reading this, but I guess I'll just check up on chapter 3 to see if it has a happy end.

Update:
And it was. So the girl was raped and trained to be a sex slave or something I guess?
Well, I do feel bad for her but she's still a bitch in my opinion.

Last edited on 28 June 2016, 20:24.

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Miyabi is love.

Salaryman finds girl, takes girl home, girl thinks sex is a good payment/she likes sex, tries to seduce him, he keep refusing. He finds her presence fills his empty home with life ask her to stay. She likes him so she's willing to stay but she'll seduce him for sex and he'll resist her for one month to prove there's more between man and woman than just sex.

This may well become a hallmark for Miyabi to be remembered as a romance artist. It hearkens back to Mikami Cannon's early work of picking up another stray kitty. Clearly one vanilla romance between two of disparate ages. The sexual build up is great, particularly for self inserts. The man a handsome gentleman, the girl beautiful, alluring and lewd. As the majority of readers are male the pov follows the man through his vulnerability to loneliness yet keeps the girl's inner thinking unexplained and by keeping her mysterious and unfathomable it increases her alluring charm. I want to compare her to Napata's girls but they are charming through their adorable actions and facial expression. Her's by lewdness and unexplained motives. Although I prefer finding out her motive or background in the second chapter, which would defeinitely be revealed in ch3, Miyabi does provide a motive if lewd that she just likes sex.

Needs more acrobatic deep throat. 0_0 Keeping my eyes on you final chapter. -_-

Last edited on 10 May 2016, 05:26.

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(´・ω・｀)......

Last edited on 22 May 2016, 15:38.

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Pff she's such a dirty whore....
Why would he even bother himself with random slut.
Well sometimes even prostitutes get love and marriages,you know,even tho it's dumb.

Also,wtf actually,he gave her a home,food and she brings a stranger in HIS house. That's just epitome of trash.

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♪~ pretty woman, walking down the street ~♫

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When this finishes I hope someone can translate this. Anything by Miyabi never disappoints.

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Those last pages of chapter was increasingly intense...
This has similarities of the elegance that Miyabi's earlier works has but has a more darker feel to it..
Hope this has a happy ending, and doesn't lead toward a dark route...

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@Gitami I'm not seeing where the vanilla is when she's basically about to fuck another dude before he walks in on them and probably was doing it before in his house without him knowing

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Bitch whiteknighting is an archetype, but there's ways and ways of dealing with it. I can totally see why someone like Gitami would like and compliment it (that figures), but I don't think I can consider good romance anything putting too emphasis on the girl being looser than a cannon, mentally and literally. Tama from Sesame Street was easygoing, after one brief mention it was shrugged off and put out of the way, here it's going on non-stop. Unless they were into femdom, people would be turning their noses up pretty quick. And I don't see why her motives about her behaviour matter.

@Ravenbane: she knows when he's coming home, she baited him. The problem is where (not her place) and why (to prove she's right, as if).

EDIT: Oh, so it's similar to "Single Nabe, Futari Nabe", flashback and everything, not bitch but damaged goods whiteknighting. Good romance for those into it, but it makes no difference to me, I find neither hot.

Last edited on 28 June 2016, 15:30.

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You guys are misunderstanding this, I doubt she would fuck the other guy, it was all a ploy to have MC bang her. She knows exactly when he arrives from work.

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From what I can tell, the guy should have known purely from what she obviously wanted to do all this time that he is nothing special. Didn't seem that she gave a fuck as to with whom she wants to have sex with.

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pg.54 -pg.55 just magnificent.
MC suppressed himself so long that in the end he gave her such a strong fuck.
You don't usually see a hentai in which they fuck so hard that they FALL OFF THE BED/SOFA (Although this happens in real life)

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I'd rather he throw her on the street.

She bring a man on the apartment of her saviour, who knows what this crazy woman will do on the future.

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hihohahi continues to be a cunt and not wait until Mikocon uploads the magazine to sadpanda *rolls eyes*

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The plot is actually quite intriguing. Never thought I'd say this on EH, of all places...

Now that the final chapter has been revealed, all those comments crying "slut" and "manipulative bitch" seem so awfully trivial. Well, not that you guys were exactly wrong though. The author probably intentionally structured the story this way. She is pretty much all those things, but also has some tragic backstory that made her this way, and is lucky enough to find a man who could tolerate her long enough for a sappy ending.

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That is fucking deep

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at least.. vanilla, at the end i luv it ^^

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Esto merece traducción, no entendí mucho pero linda historia jajaja

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我只关心何时出中文版？

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@Gitami

That's actually kinda not true. I have translated the entire thing (the last chapter is in progress), and it is more like he is the man of old rules who thinks that the younger generation does not understand what love is, while only thinking of sex, so that is why he refused banging her for a while (a month is kinda TOO long for a test). She also liked him, but she thinks that he finds her unworthy of sexual interest and tries to seduce him by all means (finally provoking him by inviting a fake lover there right at the time he gets back from the job, which she knew really well after a month together). And she is all towards the sex for a reason, since her parents gave her to some sort of yakuza for debts, and she was kinda mind broken. Still they have a happy end together.

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感动，大叔终于看清了自己的内心，也没想到妹子过去有过这样的遭遇…

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working with Metaphrastes on getting this translated.

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想看前传

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