I couldn't find an English version of this great doujinshi, so I tried my best to translate the Japanese one.

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This is rewrite

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What pop9 said. The translation is too liberal it's bordering rewrite territory. Almost every speech bubble is wrong.

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well at lest it make sence i dont see you translating it

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Glad you checked it. Yeah it's way too interpretative to even be called a loose translation. It consistently replaces bubbles with totally new dialogue that didn't exist before, not even by a stretch of the imagination.

Ex:
Pg 1:
Original - Ranma: Kya~~~~ Thanks~
Rewrite - Ranma: This is great! Guys give me all kinds of free stuff when I'm a girl.

Pg 9:
Original - Ranma: "I'm leaving first"
Rewrite - Ranma: "Next time I see you, Ryoga, you'd better be ready for a fight."

Original - Akane: "Hey....Ranma?! "
Rewrite - Ranma: "Then I'll show you who's out of shape"

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Lol, why did they make her "fat". Was there even a point to that?

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she wasnt fat she was only curby
also she got slim at the end no damage done

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look like sensualaoi caught your bullshit malstromberg. And why rewrites are still a thing just why?!

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No epsilon8, she was definitely fat in this doujin. Only fatty lovers would ever call that much blubber "chubby".
The point of her being fat in this story is that she finds out she can burn a lot of calories by having sex.

So the joke is:

she became fat because she eats a lot of sweets as a girl and get most sweets for free as a girl by men.
Then she has sex with other men (see Kunou) and burns off the excess weight.

Likely there is even some sort of pun there.

But I agree, I found it depressing that in one of the few doujin she has sex with Kunou, she ends up being fat.
That's almost as bad as her always being a slut in every doujin and not a virgin... and always doing it with Ryouga.

Edit: Also, is there some rule against users stalking other users? seems that no matter what I write, the user "Sher-san" shows up out of nowhere to downrank me.

Last edited on 30 August 2016, 12:48.

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The editing seems rather crappy too....

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What weight gain, there is none in here

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