Sorry that's not my language, so it's a bit difficult ^^' and for the needle, yes it's too much XD... (but i have only one needle in the tons of mod that i've downloaded, and it's this one :-P)
Pretty impressive, I liked it. There were some English and grammar mistakes, but not too many. With a proofreader I think it could be really good! I look forward to your new sets!
This is just way to hot I need more!! ^^ really liking how you not only make it hot also ad a bit of story in it. I'm actually really curious now how it continues after this.