Drawn by Kamizuki Shiki
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RAW: /g/867318/6b2509857b/

Prequel: /g/973224/5791155c89/

Sequel: /g/970762/ef991abb9e/

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I'm sorry for the inconvenience]

Nice, the prequel to /g/892225/d63993afe1/
Taihou is cute even as an abyssal...
Thanks for sharing!

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>Triggering dat death flag

Well, I'm glad things worked out for them. They were a cute couple. Thanks for the upload!

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Page 19

That Taihou under the bed.
HNNNG

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WTF 140mb when the raw is 20mb /g/964707/c11bf476b1/

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@(*σ´I｀)σ it's magic

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absyal versions of shipgirls give me life

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Some grammar and phrasing issues. The most glaring is on page 13: "The easy to shy Taihou that I know...". Shy is not a verb, and to quote Calvin and Hobbes, "Verbing weirds language."

EDIT:
p. 2
"What had happened to me, I wonder..." -> "I wonder what has happened to me..." or "I wonder what happened to me..."
"With 'that person'..." -> "With him..."

p. 3
"I mean, our battle is still..." -> "I mean, the war is still..."
"There ya go with those boring things again" -> "There ya go, saying those silly things again" (Boring does not make sense in context.)
"When this operation is over... From today onward, you're free from" -> "After this operation, you'll be free from" (Conflicting temporal clauses)

p. 4
Nearly all the "bridge bunny"-type talk (double-barred word polygons) is phrased very awkwardly.
first two boxes -> "Admiral, we've lost contact with Taihou! She's no longer appearing on radar!!"
"What is the damage control team doing?!" "They couldn't be there in time, so it's likely that Taihou advanced on her own while being badly damaged." A damage control team is not something that is sent out to a ship. Also, it doesn't make sense that Taihou chose to advance because the damage control team didn't get there.

Last edited on 12 March 2017, 00:42.

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Aww, Taihou...

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