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Base +2

A friendly reminder that poor grammar should be tagged when a comment detailing said errors has been made (my corrections in parenthesis)
p.2: Alisa having a double personnality beinga (is a) person shy and naive (shy and naive person) (and) can be in love with any slave she got (has), but when she start(s) to having (having) sex she look(s) anger (angry) and fucking hard a slave (not sure what you mean here, maybe fucks hard her slaves or something like that)
Now you can tag.
The pictures look good though.

Edit: This tag is not valid after all, it seems it applies only to translations (see this post)

Last edited on 22 November 2016, 03:06.

Base +15, Phadex +10

Nice start, but please remember that the internet is full of native English speakers who would be more than willing to proofread and edit. You have already done the hard part with creating a setting and actions to go with it, a few extra minutes to improve it can go a long way.

Base +6, bunnygunny +5