First few pages of an amateur fan comic about Serpieri's Druuna, set after the events of 'clone'...

Since previous attempt and comments have redrawn first few pages (other than the title page) and added 3 new pages. Hopefully it's a little better/neater than last time though it's still not going to be professional quality. Gave up on inking after first couple pages, it just makes it look worse so most is in pencil. Hopefully a few people might get something out of it.

The Horror... The Horror...
Learn to draw first, you are embarrassing yourself. Please check the other authors before posting here.

Base +6, Kouji Kabuto +5, Moosejaw +7, eddgomez +7, opulent +6, nameress +6, hestepik -8, Murderbot +10, moogabe +6

The idea is there. I support amateur artists so keep up the good work!

Base +6, hestepik +8

Would if had been to much fucking trouble to clear the speech bubbles from all that junk? It's hard to read. Also use bigger or bold fonts. The art style is messy and the perspective is all kinds of fucked up too.

Base +6, hestepik -8, moogabe +6

Great work man. You have potential so please keep honing your skills up!

Base +6

It's like Druuna, but with a hundredth of the writing and art talent.

Base +5, Murderbot +10, moogabe +6, 3DM +7

Ha! Fair enough.

Base +3

If your an artist please accept all comments and whatever from anyone and don't give up carry on and enjoy your work. I support all and comments are only peoples views. You carry on please

Base +3, Unwashed +6

Learn anatomy and do some life drawings.

Base +6, Moosejaw +8