My only issue is the self insert OC he places in nearly all of his works, nothing REALLY wrong with it but I feel it detracts from potential characters that could have added something to the story.
What does this little prick have against committing to Camilla!? If I didn't already have a thing for Lydia, she'd definitely be my wife of choice! Fuckin' ungrateful little sissy bitch. Faendal and Sven deserve her more than you.
are there any more volumes i'm unaware of? i feel bad for the poor red haired boy he didn't get a round with our heroine's body and he got her off the chopping block hopefully in the next he gets a turn