The "fake" yuri I was the hottest thing I've ever seen. Any more like it?

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Raw:
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At a glance I suspect a fifth of it is a bad translation near a rewrite, mr brother san for お兄さん is weird, またせる means kept waiting, pg 22's "いたくない...?" ("I'm not opposed?" Instead of "It doesnt hurt?") is not only wrong, but sounds deeply philosophical during sex, and on the last page she actually says return my parker (hoodie). Why didn't you wait a few hours and have me proofread the big guesses as I offered before you uploaded for my bounty? It's great unintentional humor though.

Last edited on 11 October 2016, 23:53.

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Oh Noes!
He's doing me raw!

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Wow these scans are bad too. Gonna have to acquire a copy of this book for great justice.

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Eh... the most disappointing part of a poor translation is the fact that it usually discourages proper translation of a work. Spot checked a few pages and the translations are definitely off, if not completely incorrect in several places.

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why aren't there any male tags? and i guess i might be forgetting something, but since kirino really loves little sisters why wasnt she going full otaku on him? after all, at that point kirino was the older brother and kyousuke the little sister.

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The out of character moments reminds me of PSG and the Monogatari series.

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@sensualaoi, 'Philosophical', hehe, that's putting it lightly. Page 23 made me laugh my ass off, "Kissing Passionately, in the moment, all while having a dangerous unforeseen fate ever looming above us", sounds so much more....'highbrow' than what it is.

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What cracks me up is he deftly wrote, "It's ready." when he claimed it. With a period.

I may quit bothering with making new translation bounties. I don't think I have unreasonable standards, but most of the submissions have been really bottom of the barrel wrong, and I keep thinking why don't I just do them instead? I just wish I could start bounties for stuff I read and think are worth translating, but don't have time to do, and expect others to put in the same amount of time I would put into them (while I focus on procuring raws and tg information.) This case is the most egrregious: I offered to proofread, and I directed him to the cove of scanlators and an online onomatopoeia dictionary. He used none of those methods of QC, and the takers don't seem to give a fuck about anything other than fast credits.

Actually, I apologize to the contributors for hastily letting him claim the bounty simply because my inner 隠れ鬼 enjoyed the results.

/bounty.php?search=Body+swap&t=&s=
(しかし、翻訳を失敗すず、完成をできる希望はもう果てしまった。)

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Hoi, sensualaoi.

I thought you wanted to proofread it here (and then tell me in a PM what needs to be edited (I don't get warnings for messages here)). I got all the photoshop files ready and can change things quickly. Then all I got to do is replace those files here and alakhazam -> perfect gallery. I'm pretty new at this and I told you there was a few bubbles I made some rushed guesses (because you offered to proofread, I thought I'd rather give you speed than accuracy since I had you to back me up anyways). If you want your 300k creds back I got no issue giving you those as that isn't why I'm doing this (it is to improve). Again, I'm doing these old bounties because I see it as less likely others will take them, especially if they require that you've seen the show in question recently. So even if it would remain a 1/5 "bad to rewrite", it still would be better than nothing for those who have downloaded it, and people are free to correct anything crucial here after all (and in my case I'll lurk around and edit it in later meaning it will be good in the long run).

Edit: Learned later that you actually have to reupload the whole thing even for minor editing.

Last edited on 17 March 2017, 00:25.

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Enjoyable doujin but sadly the scan quality is sub par.

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one of the best Kirinosuke doujins

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Why are the bisexual tags never there, geez

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