First two pages: Awesome

The rest: HORROR.

P.D: Pages two and four are repeated.

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@Wolfragnium

The second ones are x-ray views.

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Some comics, you put the "Commissioned by ____" right on the front in plain sight so people don't think this was YOUR idea to make. :P

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@Wolfragnium they're not, minor x-ray difference

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honestly i'm not mad at this one. the fact that it was a clone and not the original makes it not as bad

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Thought it said "cum-farting", was disappointed

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Wow ,wonderful work !
Please more like this !!!

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The panel layout is annoyingly terrible, otherwise this would be pretty good.

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The girl with robotic arms seems familiar.. Any reference or was it an OC?

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@chozoi
I wanted a fort made of cum.

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I wonder her name.
The dragon girl

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@Wolfragnium Basically

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@Purmin I believe her name is "Umi". I remember seeing her in a few other comics by different artists.

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