Holy shit we actually got a Book 3 O.o!!! What has it been, like 2 years since the last one was published? Anyway I hope this book ends with the trio being corrupted. As I say I like my good endings in my non-porn stories and corrupted whore endings in my porn stories :D

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this one lacks corruption and story progression ... another year?

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Welcome back Shinra :)

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I'm kind of disappointed with this honestly. I was really hoping for some further corruption within at least one of the main characters but it took a step back and now the professor is no longer corrupted. Guess I'll have to wait another 2 years to see Minea fully corrupted.

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also no gender bender so let's vote that tag down please

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where is gender bender, wtf?

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Here are some thoughts:

Positives
-I liked seeing Minea surrender willingly, kind of, to the demon. In the last chapter she kind of just a thoughtless puppet, but this time we actually get to see that she's enjoying her corruption which doesn't bode well for her future. It's a nice tease, and I don't really mind the wait. As long as it doesn't last forever.
-Shinra-kun's stuff has been pretty slow burn in the past but I think this series has a lot more restraint than usual. Like everyone's mentioned above me, there's not much, if any, corruption going on in this chapter, but I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing. The hardest part of writing good mind control/corruption smut is resisting the urge to jump to the good stuff. In order for the change to be really affective, we have to know the characters first. Shinra-kun's doing a good job with that.
-Good to see that he's fixed the problem with the text, the last chapter was almost unreadable.

Negatives:
-Shinra-kun does too little with too much. 226 pages is an entire arc for other rendered stories. Take Metrobay Comix, for example, which releases around 16 pages a chapter but manages to tell more story in far less time. I think that he could cut down on a lot of the time it takes to release this stuff if he'd maximize action per page. Consider the amount of time that it takes to render one image, it hardly seems worth it to devote that much time to one dialogue bubble.

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5/5 Great as usual, your aesthetic taste when it comes to 3d models is the best! Hope you are able to produce part 4 and continue the Fallen Star series soon, thanks for sharing your sultry art!!

I hope the next Fallen Star features a lot more Leto moments, her story in the last chapter and the scenes of her corruption are imo the best corruption I've seen in the genre. Is it possible to have a complete corruption like hers but then some intense moments of regret which are overcome again by lust? (her appearance slightly [very slightly] shifting back during this intense struggle but then always changing back and proving to be forever would be hot) It would be different to see one of the corrupted ones struggle with their fate after foreseeing the future, but despite their fighting the corruption being unable to do anything and feeling like they are completely defeated when peaking in their lust, only to start the cycle anew.

Welcome back!!

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Welcome back, good luck for your work. I'm, in my side, pretty happy with the way that you seem to have work with this one, not adding a zillion of characters helps, but I fully understand all the people that want more corruption, In my side, I really hope that "corruption takes time" during the sex scene and etc.. But, I think that it will coming in the next arc.

I'm a little bit worry about Harriet that seems never emotionally affected by anything.

Gooood luuuuck man

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omfg finally it came out!

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I can't begin to describe how excited I am for this. When one of your biggest fetishes is a niche, you get very attached to the few artists that are out there contributing quality material. I know there's been (and probably will always be) a lot of drama regarding your absence, and while many other may feel bitter about it, I've always given you my patience, understanding, and loyalty (even though there's not a lot of ways to show it). Please know that you'll always have some die-hard fans out there like me, no matter what your personal situation is.

Thanks for continuing to do great work and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next one in a couple of years xD

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Fuckin ungrateful! Yeah, its been 2 years, sure, its been a while. WORTH THE WAIT.

WE HAVE PART 3. GOD WILLING, A PART 4, WHATEVER THE TIME COST.

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Lovely art as usual, great facial expressions and cute outfits.
But story-wise this felt like an in-between chapter. A lot of pages where nothing really happened.

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666666666 大神终于填坑了

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All of that good work undone :(
why cant the dark ones have been more capable and taken over harriet, and donald and his sister and mernia

I want to see the headmaster corrupted and turned into a dirty old perv with a giant schlong "welcuming" all new students :D

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