[Kouji] Bishoujo Vampire ni Bonyuu Drink Bar ni Sareru Hanashi | Turned into a Breast Milk Fountain by a Beautiful Vampire [English] [Limonchik11]

Posted on 01 May 2017, 07:44 by: limonchik11

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Kouji's excellent comic, originally published weekly on his twitter:
https://twitter.com/ko_second

Translation by: Myself
Proofreading (all the work, really) by: Goat
Typesetting: Kouji

This is actually the official translation <3

Posted on 05 March 2017, 13:41 by: limonchik11

Edit: The translation is done, the proofreading is up to the end of part I, and Kouji's only typeset up to here.

Posted on 05 March 2017, 13:50 by: tganimation6

Nice title. Doesn't seem to relate well to the translation though, besides the whole turned into a girl thing, but maybe you've not typeset the bit with the actual fountain made from a human's chest? Anyways, it's a nice read. Enjoyable, even, especially when you focus on the interactions between the vampire and the guy and how he slowly gets influenced by his new body.

Edit: I see. Well, good luck!

Last edited on 05 March 2017, 14:21.

Posted on 05 March 2017, 14:18 by: limonchik11

@tganimation6

This is a WIP translation of /g/1034935/ebaf5ed5ca/
We're only at like page 43 out of 138.

@Dark Mac LOL I brainfarted and forgot a word: its Breastmilk Fountain

@endarion88

Ko said he wanted to post it for people who had asked him for English translations before, but its not on his pixiv yet.

＠Rivfader89

I will when everything is uploaded.
I'm just trying to get a teaser out right now, but I did translate even the extra scenes so.

@RaZor92
I get it. That's why I translated it :)

@BitchezBCrayCray
STOCKHOLM to the MAXXX!!! Give it up for Basshunter <3

@thecriticofinnocence
It's fully translated, but not yet fully proofread or typeset yet.

Last edited on 13 March 2017, 01:06.

Posted on 05 March 2017, 15:21 by: The Goat is Watching

I was hoping the mangaka had copies of the art that didn't include the text boxes. It would look so much better if the boxes could be replaced with horizontal ones. Oh well.

Posted on 05 March 2017, 15:58 by: asdfghfd

A pretty interesting read

Posted on 05 March 2017, 16:07 by: Capi duffman

Nice work, and nice to know the author supported the translation.
Looking forward to the part where they become an insane couple.

"As long as I feed milk she won't feed on humans! I'm a genius!"
"I don't like her drinking animal blood, she should only be drinking my milk, but my nutritional value isn't big enough for that"
"I know! As a vampire I can feed on humans and my milk will maintain her! I'm a genius!"

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Posted on 05 March 2017, 18:30 by: SSomeone

I was waiting for this! Thank you so much guys. I'm anxious for the continuation.

Posted on 05 March 2017, 23:38 by: Dartmuth

Thank you so much! Can't wait for the rest of it!

Posted on 06 March 2017, 05:47 by: galio12

Did she... Did she inject soup into his bloodstream? I uhh... I don't think that's how it works.

Posted on 06 March 2017, 09:54 by: bloodyred

I've really enjoyed this so far

Posted on 06 March 2017, 15:53 by: dickliker420

This is so great. Thank you so much for translating.

Thank you for completing!!! Thank you!!!!!!

Last edited on 15 April 2017, 16:03.

Posted on 06 March 2017, 18:38 by: Hawu

Thank you so much for translation :3

Posted on 12 March 2017, 23:45 by: RaZor92

This is genuinely one of the greatest things I have read. It has almost everything that I absolutely adore in it. Vampires, gender bender, slowly progressing relationships and acceptance, surprising grimness.

It's the most perfect thing I have ever read.

Posted on 12 March 2017, 23:56 by: BitchezBCrayCray

Can I get a Stockholm syndrome in the chat boys

Posted on 13 March 2017, 19:24 by: swagmeister1337

While reading this all I can feel is sadness that it is going to be over, and I'll have to wait years for something similar to show up. Japs really need to calm down on the NTR and learn how to write a good story.

Posted on 14 March 2017, 18:54 by: galio12

Stockholm Syndrome: The Manga

Posted on 18 March 2017, 09:58 by: Lorisor

pg.88
...I don't like where this is going.

Posted on 18 March 2017, 17:47 by: mutopis

some errors.

pg 47_45 "she wouldn't be able to anyone ever again". sentence seems to be missing a word, maybe "hurt anyone ever again"?

pg 55-53 "was starting hit him", should be "was starting to hit him"

pg 57_55 "his breasts would bigger", maybe "his breasts would grow bigger"?

pg 60_58 "by turning his attention something to something", delete 'something', "by turning his attention to something"

pg 61_59 ", began to" wording is off, maybe ", he began to"?

pg 63_61 "to g o to" you shouldn't separate the word "go".

pg 70_68, "starting crying" should be "started crying"

pg 73_71 "I love here," should be "I love her"

pg 74_72 "that make his mind" should be, "that made his mind"

pg 81_79 "w hole life"

pg 84_82 "going to dead", should be "going to be dead"

Posted on 19 March 2017, 12:43 by: KrystalKross23

This is perfection, the reason I wake up in the morning. 12/10.

Happy Ending or Riot

Posted on 20 March 2017, 23:13 by: Loccsta

Still a better love story than Twilight

Last edited on 21 March 2017, 00:49.

Posted on 27 March 2017, 03:05 by: kiunyasha2

Update contains no lewds, only plot!?

... and I'm not even mad :3

Posted on 27 March 2017, 04:40 by: The Goat is Watching

Hope you guys enjoy part 2! I've already proofread about half of it, including 11 pages after this last update. I've been going to the effort to condense the text a bit more this time around, so it fits more easily into the boxes.

Seeing that there are a lot less errors this time around, I guess that confirms that a lot of the mistakes in part 1 are the result of the mangaka removing words to make everything fit.

Posted on 27 March 2017, 12:03 by: mac77

At first I thought they were going to suggest that Douglas was in love with Ashton, but it feels more like a brotherly love. I still can't completely rule out that option of closet love, Ashton looked like a girl with his hair and Douglas was watching over him as such when they were young.

It's too much to add Douglas to the harem, this isn't THAT kind of story, either-
Ashton will kill Douglas to protect Giselle,
or
Giselle will kill Douglas to protect Ashton.
I'm placing my bets that Ashton will kill Douglas to show how love/loyalty/how bad his Stockholm syndrome. The fact that we're hearing about Douglas now means Ashton was NEVER serious about his friendship.

Posted on 27 March 2017, 12:37 by: MyraLune

lol page 101: dundunduuuuuuun!!!

@mac77

or it just means it was never relevant until now, and to have given details about douglas before he came crashing through the door would have killed any shock and surprise cause of blatant foreshadowing. childhood friends always has a sort of value to the MC's, even if it's only barely touched upon

Posted on 27 March 2017, 17:30 by: swordholder

Best case scenario vampire turns Douglas into a woman fun times all around
Probable case she kills douglas and Ashton loses what's left of her mind

Posted on 28 March 2017, 03:23 by: 25toLife

> Trying to kill himself by not peeing...

Posted on 01 April 2017, 08:32 by: ast4

This Douglas story really packs a punch.

It would have been easy to portray him as someone who
doesn't understand or is unwilling to see things from
Ashton's point of view. Instead he listens carefully to
his friend and sheds a bright light on how Ashton has
been manipulated.

Even though Ashton long gave up on himself Douglas
refuses to do the same and promises that there is
still a place for him back in the village. He sees his
friend lost in darkness and reminds him there is hope,
a way out. That's what a real friend is.

You can't blame him for wanting to forcefully remove
Ashton from that place. He is convinced that Ashton is
no longer capable of acting of his own free will and he's
not wrong.

Posted on 01 April 2017, 09:02 by: The Goat is Watching

To those of you wondering; The end page for this and the last update was 100% deliberate.

Your tears are delicious.

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Posted on 01 April 2017, 13:07 by: mac77

The update and conversations between Douglas and Ashton is kinda telling actually. Ashton never believed he could live up to his father or the town and this is baked into his mind since he was a kid. He wouldn't have had much of purpose in life if he killed Giselle and less so now. However Giselle accepted him since day 1. Ashton talking to Douglas showed me that Ashton is more of a kid searching for a place to belong or the love of a parent than the inner monologue or narrator lets on. Giselle and her castle fills that role as more of the mom and her home despite their appearances being swapped, Giselle looking like a kid and Ashton looking like a mom.

I think Douglas is kidding himself thinking the town would accept him coming back as a busty woman. He'll go back and either do back breaking farm work or be a prostitute in their time.
Honestly Ashton has it good for the most part, most so than most princesses or queens in this middle ages like world. Think about it.
He's protected by a army of bats and an all-powerful immortal being.
He's clothed, feed and sheltered.
He's not chained up or locked up.
He gets bathed and loved.
All he has to do is be a babysitter/guide/wet nurse, many women would kill for this role in any timeline.

Ashton lied about draining his "blood" for Giselle and that's what made the conversation start to spiral downward because Douglas himself thought the story doesn't add up. Ashton didn't consider what Giselle will do after he is gone, the only way I can see their bond continuing is if Ashton get Giselle's blood and she becomes some kind of quasi immortal. Pointing the gun at Douglas is symbolic, doesn't matter if Ashton pulls the trigger or not, Ashton has no reason to "go back".

Posted on 01 April 2017, 20:39 by: D u b b y

This is amazing! I almost feel like this should be a full-fledged 50+ chapter manga... but the verbosity and eloquence is just such a wonderful facet you really don't see often enough.

Posted on 02 April 2017, 01:34 by: MikukoAya

Well, that updated stop point seemed like an obvious eventuality to me. I mean, Ashton has a nice life and has little reason to leave while Douglas, despite his good point, isn't fully considering Ashton's position. He is trying to do what is best for Ashton, but if Ashton had a hard life in town, going back as a female won't help considering Ashton would just be labelled a monster and shunned at best. Killed or worse being most likely. I doubt that it would have made a difference if he was completely honest instead of changing the words. It would just be another path to the same point.

Giselle has always been a childish, innocent character who wanted to love, but never could because her idea of love was dangerous to those she loved. Despite her actions, she really seems to be a case of innocent evil.

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Posted on 02 April 2017, 03:54 by: The Goat is Watching

I just sent the last of the proofreading to limon. Praise Helix.

Now all that's left is to fix all the stupid errors. The things I do for smut...

Posted on 15 April 2017, 07:09 by: toop

Douglas deserved better

Posted on 15 April 2017, 11:56 by: The Goat is Watching

I got a little something extra for y'all. During the proofreading, I noticed that Ashton's ring rolls away as he carries Douglas away (page 117), but he's seen wearing a ring on page 130. So I asked Limon to ask Kouji if it was the same ring. This was the reply they gave us.

"Regarding Goat's question: the ring that Ashton wears after he becomes a vampire is no more than a simple part of his fashion's design. The ring from his father, which Douglas dropped on the ground on page 114, was taken out as trash by the bats as neither Ashton nor Giselle showed any particular interest in it. Ashton had given the ring to Douglas hoping that he would "hold true to his kind soul forever". However, Douglas' straightforward kindliness backfired on him as Ashton had already become completely infatuated with Giselle, who returned his feelings."

Damn, that's cold. :(

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Posted on 15 April 2017, 15:51 by: yummines

"He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster..."

Clearly Ashton did not read enough Nietzsche.

Posted on 15 April 2017, 16:59 by: Holsterbau

In the end, Ashton turned out to be a far worse monster.

Posted on 15 April 2017, 18:30 by: SSomeone

So it's finally complete. God this ending was sick, I loved it. As I say before: thank you so much for all your hard work Lemon and Goat, for me really worth the waiting. And one last thing: can you guys upload the extra images that kouji did? You know, like this one: /s/91d9fde9ce/1034935-148
I think would be great aggregate this images to this gallery too.

Posted on 15 April 2017, 19:33 by: Nexev

Moral of the story: Purge vampires

Posted on 15 April 2017, 20:06 by: Fizzle94

Still a better lovestory than Twilight

Posted on 15 April 2017, 22:10 by: Nermie

As black-hearted as this turned out to be, there's just something about this literally eternal love that warms the soul regardless. 11/10 would slaughter helpless villagers to breast-feed an adorable vampire girl.

Posted on 16 April 2017, 01:39 by: Hybridwolf

I originally liked this story about the battle of wits between an possibly ancient vampire and a hunter turned woman (and the adult stuff), but in the end I ended up doing a complete 180. I can understand the reasoning behind it all, the fact that her mind has been warped by being alone with this Giselle for so long and the constant repeating scenarios eventually changing his wants around, but I don't like it at all. It ruined the story for me. Thats not to say its not good anymore, if anyone still likes it fine, but for me I despise that ending as in the end nothing is sorted out as in fact things are worse now.

Humans are weak and vampires or anything else will always be stronger than them and never be beaten. They will always win somehow. Humans are worthless things that can't do anything while vampires, or whatever else, are the best and can do anything and will always corrupt the MC without any other outcome present. I really don't like that kind of portrayal. Even something weak can take down something stronger, either in numbers or some other method. Heck having enough of a strong enough will or drive can be the saving grace. But the casual discard of the past friendship with this guy is just grating. Even if Ashton's mind was warped or whatever he should have at least some semblence of friendship about it, and even begin to realise things are going out of hand. The firend could still die but it cause a change or something that gets the story going somewhere else.

I guess its more the trope I dislike rather than the story. A 'horror' story usually only ends in two ways; 1. The MC wins and all is fine (maybe a hint at the big bad is still alive but mostly good end overall) or 2. The big bad wins and its either back to business as usual or its worse. I mean surely there are more and better ways of doing that kind of story. Ah well I'm jsut rambling on now so I'll just end it here :p.

Tl;DR I Liked it at the start but the ending ruined it for me.

Posted on 16 April 2017, 01:50 by: mac77

The long story.
Douglas didn't deserve that, his only "crime" was being too nice. He didn't leave a friend behind the way the town abandoned his father way back when, and that's his thanks. I get it, Douglas almost definitely wasn't going back to town empty handed, but Ashton didn't exhaust all the options. Think about what happened.
- Ashton is a trained hunter and Douglas is a farmer. Ashton disarmed and took down Douglas even after months out of practice.
- Douglas didn't want to hurt anyone, he wasn't going to shoot a woman and he wasn't going to shoot a friend so Ashton had more plot armor than Giselle ever had.
- Ashton could have fired a warning shot, or shot his arm, or just pointed the gun and threatened him to leave.
- Douglas was weaponless and defenseless on the ground trying to get up, he may as well have been executed.
- He never threatened Giselle, he was very understanding and reasonable about the entire thing except from maybe trying to force Ashton out of the castle.
All the guy wanted was his old friend back.
They didn't even wrestle for the gun and it just "went off" like they show in TV or movies to show a metaphorical 'conflict or impasse of believes', Ashton had all the advantages and didn't give a second thought to wipe out his only friend from childhood knowing how much he cared about him.
It wasn't even a heat of the moment thing. Like I said before Ashton is kid like, and the tears he shed before shooting Douglas was more like child's temper tantrum than tears of remorse. Douglas was the last tether to Ashton's old life, and Douglas getting shot showed how easy it was to snip that cord on his old life.
One thing I feared was Ashton would care so little for Douglas that Ashton would offer Douglas's corpse or drain his blood to Giselle to dine on. Can't say what he actually did was a step up, trashing Giselle's blood stash to hide the corpse's scent.

Ashton became a bigger monster than Giselle ever was, at least she waited for people to come to trespass on her castle or fed on animals. I guess because Ashton has a bigger body he needs to eat more? He's so far gone at the end he doesn't see he pushed his pain on to other children like he suffered in his childhood, in a weird way Ashton spares some kids that don't survive that pain he once suffered by killing them, which by defect makes a continuously bigger monster. I kinda get it Ashton obliterated his town because deep down he hated that place and now he doing crowd control on the world, which could be seen as a good or bad thing, at their speed, that world will have a slim chance of leaving or evolving past the dark/middle ages. Even if everyone went across the world, they would be chased because the vampires go where "the food" is and cattle or animals can't seem to satisfy Ashton the way it did Giselle. They might have stood a chance if the towns banded together and came to the castle in machetes and torches to cut off their limbs and burn them like Ashton planned before, but I didn't catch it if vampire had super speed to go with their strength, then numbers wouldn't have mattered much. By the end most of the men nearby seemed gone and the majority of the near by towns consisted of women and children that were too weak, too scared and too unorganized to plan any kind of assault. Whether or not it was planned by Ashton to take out as many men as possible so there would be little opposition, or if he ate up the majority of men then went on to women and children I guess we'll never be 100% sure. Perhaps Ashton only eating humans to symbolize his hated and weakness for any humanity left within himself or humanity in general. All this pain because Ashton finally found a place of happiness. I could understand, if Ashton was wronged all his life, and to some degree or in some parts he was, but this happiness he found was build on lies, manipulation, deceit and other mind games. Still, I can't say their relationship is awful, just tragic.

It would have been easy to make Ashton become more girly and tomboy-ish as time passed, but it was important that his personality remained so he could become less of himself and more of what Giselle wanted him to be. I loved how this was showed not only by his body changing but his clothes as time passed. One could say that their encounter was inevitable or fate, Ashton obsessed over facing Giselle almost all his life and Giselle sort of planned for years for Ashton to come at her door step, their obsessions for each other become infatuations and literally starving for each other in certain points. Sure they are monsters, but genetically speaking, they are the superior race and the humans are simply "below" them on the food chain.

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Posted on 16 April 2017, 02:07 by: The Goat is Watching

@Hybridwolf

It's *his* mind. Giselle changed Ashton's sex, but he is still a man. In this story, Ashton is referred to as a woman only by people who do not know who he is, such as Douglas or the children in part 2. There is a tiny bit of fluctuation in Kouji's use of pronouns, but even in the Japanese version, Ashton refers to himself as a man pretty exclusively throughout the story, all the way to the end.

Gender identity is an element of the mind; the awareness that you are a man or a woman is wired into you, and Giselle did not magically change that. The only changes she imposed onto his mind came from her ongoing abuse and manipulation, which left him completely wrapped around her finger by the end of part 1. Most TG stories tend to ignore gender identity completely; the character's sex is changed, and they just automatically start referring to them self as the opposite gender. But, as someone with a lot of friends who are transgender, I don't believe someone would actually do that in this situation. Very few TG-themed stories really pay any attention to gender identity like this one does, let alone focus the story on it.

Ones that actually do, like Girl Reborn or Shishunki Bitter Change? Those are very rare, unfortunately. :(

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Posted on 17 April 2017, 04:18 by: kilerog

Well that turned a lot more morbid very quickly. It's darkly ironic that Ashton turned into a far greater monster than the one he originally set out to hunt. And to further the irony it was poor Douglas, who set out to rescue his friend, who ended up cementing him on this path.

That said, though I enjoyed the story, the abrupt "and then Ashton didn't give a shit and became a vampire serial killer" was a bit off putting. Even if that was the direction the author wanted to go, I feel like it would have been better to draw the progression out a bit more. Have Ashton actually deal with the whole "shot my best friend" thing before taking refuge in "I'll become a vampire like Giselle and not care about the humans."

The whole "humans are only food and nothing else" seems a bit farcical given that Giselle fell in love with a number of men in the first place. If humans are nothing but food to vampires, how would that happen in the first instance, and why would she care to correct it? Plus, it seems like the whole "lactating milk" is already a perfect no-murder feeding solution. Just kidnap people from or take over the village, and use your vampire magic to turn everyone into a milk-bag and voila.

Though I suppose that could just be Ashton's warped take on being a vampire. If he has decided to completely turn away from his past (to the point of cold-heartedly killing his best friend) and care only about Giselle it would make sense that he justifies it with "humans are nothing but food." And there's no point in putting effort to preserve the calves' lives if you can just murderize them with the same results.

Though I can't help but wish for a sequel with the descendants of the village survivors coming back to confront the vampires (and being bad ass enough to avoid getting slaughtered off hand.)

Posted on 19 April 2017, 17:01 by: wario09

This could work as a visual novel with many endings

Posted on 01 May 2017, 05:33 by: The Goat is Watching

It's more story than porn, though.

Part 2 is like 90% plot and characterization, with maybe 5 pages of actual sexy times.

Also, the version limon posted yesterday evening had a duplicate page and one missing page, so someone should update the torrent with the corrected version he posted early this morning.

Last edited on 01 May 2017, 23:59.

Posted on 10 November 2018, 22:29 by: CH2493

This is one of those stories you can't jack off to. The story is just too good.

Posted on 14 February 2020, 15:06 by: mlpfimftw

Finally got around to reading this. The downward spiral was unexpected, but predictable. Didn't really do it for me, considering how much care was given to each persons backstory.

Posted on 24 February 2020, 06:43 by: The Goat is Watching

@Psychotic Pastry

That isn't correct. Giselle wasn't able to survive on Ashton's milk alone, before he became a vampire and ate people. When he was just a regular human, she needed to supplement his milk with blood from wild animals.

Posted on 03 March 2020, 09:41 by: Zakuzelo

Suffer not a vampire to live.

Posted on 04 November 2020, 09:18 by: Psychotic Pastry

@The Goat is Watching

You're assuming I meant 1 human to 1 vampire, which isn't the case. If the only problems are insufficient nutrition and limited quantities (which the narration explicitly states are the advantages that milk derived from blood has), then bulk production solves both of those issues. Especially since vampires clearly don't have to worry about the dangers of overeating with their superior biology.

Posted on 08 December 2020, 03:42 by: temporary

That ending...now I just hope they both die.

Posted on 03 February 2024, 17:13 by: 逆之孽

可以汉化一下吗？

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[Kouji] Bishoujo Vampire ni Bonyuu Drink Bar ni Sareru Hanashi | Turned into a Breast Milk Fountain by a Beautiful Vampire [English] [Limonchik11]

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