It's like a Japanese bara artist did the pencils and basic outline for a oneshot, then left half the pages on the bus for an English teenage slashfiction blogger to try and finish and translate. Why is the wizard drinking hot chocolate? Why are there non-sequitur references to things like Potter Puppet Pals? Comics are a visual medium, so why is there full paragraphs of written exposition over stickman doodles? Why is there a rage comic face when they haven't been relevant for about five years?

It's like the comic equivalent of downloading an erotic audiobook only to find someone's randomly spliced dated memes like NOPE, IT'S CHUCK TESTA throughout it.

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But will there be more?

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Nah, really, these sketches are strictly superior, even design-wise. Sad!

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