Translator: At4r1
Editor: WheldrakeX

RAW [Digital]: /g/1405919/052574ba8b/

Megaton's Musings: Like the outcome was ever in doubt...

Probably put some more EsuEsu works up for translation requests in my bounties soonish.

I think this might be the best dialog I've read all month. Possibly all year.

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Wow that art. Dialogue/TL is top-tier, too. I'd love to see more works TL'd, OP. You did a good job. :D

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There is some mind fuckery about with this art is it cg or not....it has to be...he just dresses it up to like like 2d right?

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am I being trolled? in what way is this book remarkable? the art is average, the dialogue is average, what's the big deal?

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Wombtastic

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I found it to be a bit annoying.

As soon she realise she's a sex slave, it just ends with a black page and a huge time leap. No sex slave sex.
As soon she becomes brainwashed, it just ends with a black page and a huge time leap. No brainwashed sex.

This comic literally cut out and jumped past the parts that would in theory be the best and most arousing parts of the story, and instead gave us black pages.

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You mean the power of the dick wasn't enough with this one ?

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Uterus Magician? I would've gone with Womb Witch. Gotta have that sexy, sexy alliteration. Perhaps even Womb Witch VS Dire Demon. Has a nice ring to it.

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@kazutoyo
Corruption/mind break is about the journey, not the destination.

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I think the artist traced a CGI model for the heroine and the villain while drawing the rest himself.

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@redfog
The journey AND the destination, the whole package is much better than a half-assed deal

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