Not bad but it feels a bit odd. Like it’s slanted to the left. Dunno why. Actually the dimensions are fucked in general. Fix that and work on sharing and it could be good.

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@Auhra
That happens with amateur artists, especially self-taught - but usually it is the other way around, slanted to the right. Either the artist is left-handed, or they know about this and are trying to train it out - but overcompensating in that regard, gaining the left slant instead. Unnatural proportions serve as a weak proof of that theory.

Although, to me it seems slanted to the right, so...

Base +24, ILikeItThicc +6

The art needs work, but I like the dynamic in this comic.

Base +6, Darkfade +6, TheWarpath +6

The ending makes me sick... why treat someone that way?..

Base +6, Otaku3000 +6, Nightusre +7, Airotix +6

may it will look better with no colors
anyway, great work, thanks for sharing

also many pics seem to be compressed

Base +6

hmm cover seems traced but I don't remember from what

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