translated this months ago but didn't know how or where to upload till now

looks like you made up your own text bubbles instead of the existing ones. or in your case, text boxes. it's making it difficult to distinguish between thoughts and spoken words sometimes.
the wording and editing also needs improvement. overall an okay effort, but a lot can be fixed.

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finally something that isnt NTR in the milf tag

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I though that copy guy knocked his head real hard or something because the saturation isn't flying sky-high, but it turn out it's translated by different guy

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Alternative english versions:
The human carrot version by color tormentor CopyOf: /g/1587127/c68e41479d/
The original color version of CopyOf's translation with improved typesetting: /g/1793902/bfc9c6db0d/

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it's so hot when the mother wants it inside

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p.50 why lets the text censored her nipple?

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Poor Grammar tag:

p2
This is no time to play with girls do you understand?

p3
Ofcourse i know that..
Thats very immature!
shes pretty upset

p4
no..this must be a lie is this for real?

p7
Of course im not going to do that while were looking face to face!

p14
But not I'ts time to take care of it, so do what you normally do like before

p32
Your always such a spoiled brat

p36
My son's sexual appetite is growing strong and stronger

p45
It's going to make me scream outloud!
I can't believe it She's massaging her titties

p47
I can't believe your still shaking your hips for more!

p48
I think it's safe this time of month...

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