@komakatta If I were you, I'd demand my money back. Awkward phrasing, Comic Sans font (and no capital letters at that), no punctuation with tons of run-on sentences, terrible editing with scattershot text placement and no leveling whatsoever.
Basically, I don't see anything worth paying for from @Qcumber5985. Did you even ask for a sample of their work before you commissioned them? Or perhaps you comissioned them on Fiverr? Either way, you got ripped off. You need to be more careful with who you commission in the future because they might end up butchering a perfectly fine work like this one.
Dear lord. Comic Sans in a scanlation, in 2021. I thought the entire world knew better than this by now. I thought we'd left this stuff behind in the late 90's and early 2000's. But I guess this is an old one, so maybe the translator was just trying to be period-correct? I really hope so but I'm not that oblivious/naïve.
Also, broken english, and probably typeset in mspaint. Maybe it's just because I've become spoiled, but I don't know if I can fap to this on account of all the other issues.
@THDragon and @dragontamer, thissss is actually the other way around i was the one commissioned for the translation. haven't got paid, which is why i wasn't even trying mostly. oh, and about phrasings and broken english, that's just how old porn mangas are written,