https://www.pixiv.net/user/474346/series/95543

Is there a tag for Engrish?

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i usually don't care about grammar but oof, this one is hard

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wtf is that crappy eletrical system for you to get shocked by a lightswitch on page 4,

anyone knows who the translator is? I would like to help them out a bit since some of this hurts to read.
for contact: [email protected]

Last edited on 20 February 2021, 13:01.

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Story: awesome
graphics: very nice
grammar: *bangs head against wall*

please, for the love of this fantastic story, let someone check the spelling...

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"what's VHS?"
oof

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@mllhild
The translator is the author him/herself. Evidenced by the fact they're available at their pixiv. Mayhaps you can contact Darkmaya themself and offer to be the proofreader?

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pg2 - "bing it anytime"

Bing is still a thing?

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my brain farting this english

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