[Sadalsuud (Hoshiaka)] Seijun datta Hazu no Mashu wa Futanari no Yuuwaku ni Ochiru Dai-4-wa (Fate/Grand Order) [English] [hardcase8translates]

I feel tempted to put a misc:poor grammar tag on this just for all those times 'the' is used instead of personal pronouns or personal pronouns were missing. Then again, there's more than that.

Page 3: falls into futanari's temptation This implies Mash to be tempted by a futa, not her being a futa. falls into futanari temptation
Page 6: Calling mom is so exciting -> Calling her mom is so exciting
Page 10: Boobs are so big -> Her boobs are so big
I don't want to just touch it from above her clothes, I want to touch it directly ->I don't just want to touch them through her clothes, I want to touch them directly
Page 12: are Raiko-san's -> is Raiko-san's, pussy is singular.
Page 16: I don't care what a woman or man means I can't tell what this is supposed to mean either. Did you mean to write I don't care what being a man or woman means? Still somewhat nonsensical.
Don't lose against these sexual desires Urges would probably fit better, but that's just nitpicking.
I won't be able to go back Either I won't be able to turn back or there's no going back.
Page 20: This is what the penis feels like when it's inside the pussy -> This is what a penis feels like when it's inside a pussy Also a bunch of the when it should have been her or my.
Page 22: The cumming is so long -> I'm cumming for so long

There are more errors, so if the examples I provided are too nitpicky to justify the tag, I can go on.

Posted on 02 January 2022, 12:35 by: Xyno2112

Why translate the 4th one without translating 1 through 3

Posted on 02 January 2022, 17:08 by: ziom236

@Xyno2112
Because this is the only one where anything happens

Posted on 12 January 2022, 20:17 by: Alexandar

It's sad this story never continued. I would have love to see Mash NTR the MC and become more corrupted.

Posted on 16 January 2022, 04:35 by: Maxwelzal

@Alexandar Do you have knowledge about it being discontinued or something? From what I knew, the creator still intends to continue the story. Would really suck if they're ending it here!

Posted on 20 March 2022, 18:47 by: BlueMoonCircle

First the post bout errors is not very useful or polite. If you want to correct it do a correct version and PM it to the translator or uploader. I for one am glad tehy translated it at all. and grateful

for this is one very very hot work. i love it.

and I do hope ther eis much much more. thiis artist has a very unique view and technique and it is powerful very powerul.

more please

Posted on 29 March 2022, 21:21 by: trunky

We need a translation for the others!

Posted on 07 July 2022, 20:30 by: Scumbini

Rough grammar
p2 a male genital -> male genitalia
was now grown -> had grown
confused with -> confused by
controlled over -> taken over by
step close -> step closer
sempai -> senpai
deep asleep -> into a deep sleep
into futanari's temptation -> to a futanari's temptations
p6 calling mom -> calling her mom
p7 in our -> in my
p10 it from above -> them over
p11 motherhood energy -> motherly aura
p13 where I came -> that I came
p22 the cumming is so long -> my orgasm is so long
p27 motherhood energy -> her motherly aura
to her -> of her
motherhood energy -> her motherly aura
p28 enjoy as -> enjoy it as
p30 feels so -> feel so

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language:	english translated
parody:	fate grand order
character:	minamoto no raikou shielder \| mash kyrielight
group:	sadalsuud
artist:	hoshiaka
female:	big ass big breasts dickgirl on female futanari paizuri penis enlargement sleeping sole dickgirl
other:	multi-work series rough grammar