I find the coloured text is very hard to read against the coloured backgrounds. Because the characters aren't colour-coded, the coloured text doesn't help me understand who is speaking, anyway. I learn the names as I go along, so black text would be much better. The art is fantastic. I like that wetness is now shown. The variety of features is impressive. The internal trains of thought are pretty convoluted, but create tension, so it's good story-telling. May I suggest that deep-throat can be done right-side up, with ball-licking, if the throat is lined up.

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