what's page 84 story all about? was it the final chapter after the previous one?

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Ok but this is just a W for the hubby lol, divorced cheating wife and got sister who is 5x better

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@Ezendeis
描き下ろし「なぐさみ 螺旋の渦」

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So pretty much the sister switched positions. Both are premicuious but, one wanted actual love and one wanted to be free.

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Thank you for the upload!

For the first story I want to make sure I have this right. Short haired sister was jealous of long haired sister due to how easy she could talk to the fiancé. So she was seduced by the mustached professor. This goes on for a year(?) while she is still jealous of the sister's relationship with the fiancé even though she's been cheating for let's say awhile. Meanwhile the fiance starts sleeping with the long haired sister to deal with his cheating girlfriend.

The kicker seems to be according to the last chapter he takes the fall for everything. He breaks the engagement saying he has knocked up the sister a week before their wedding. Then has to quit his job because of it, which he hasn't actually done yet, they or she lied. Then we get the short haired sister being apologized to by the professor because he didn't mean to break up their engagement, and says he will leave his wife for her. I'm not sure about that with the professor since that seems weird for him to say if the fiancé is taking the blame.

I don't really understand the short haired sister saying "Don't worry Sister I'm the same as you." at the end. No you're not. While they say the long haired sister sleeps around, you never see if she cheats on her boyfriends and she only sleeps with the fiancée when they hear her fucking the professor and at first did really seem to be trying to save their relationship(1 page, but you know it's something). If anything you're sister is way better then you.

Link to the first chapter which was translated awhile back. Hopefully the rest will be translated now:
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That is all? no confrontation? I really don't know if the authors of this type of work don't have ideas to make a clear and concise ending or if they are just cowards who are afraid to confront their characters.

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Yeah, Kiasa was a coward this time. What annoys me the most is that he gave Chiaki 2.5 chapters worth of content when everyone wanted more of Tsugaru who barely got 0.5 of a chapter.

First he made a side story to explain the mental gymnastics Chiaki used to cheat on Fuji: TLDR she looked up to her extrovert sister and knew of her relationship with men so she still felt inferior when Fuji chose to be with her instead of going after Tsugaru like many other men do. Yeah, that's her excuse to cheat after seeing Fuji and her sister get along with talking.
Second was the chapter continuing the first which happens at the same time of the first pages of the original work johnny linked where Chiaki has cheating sex with her phone still on call with Fuji.
Final chapter is Fuji and Tsugaru moving away, they lied to her and Chiaki's parents that Tsugaru was pregnant to break off their engagement, Fuji changed jobs to not get his family into trouble and I guess he didn't want to see Chiaki close anymore. Tsugaru was still blaming herself thinking she's an awful sister for stealing her sister's man (oh boy, if she knew how fucked up her sister was she wouldn't be sad but overjoyed instead), Fuji tells her with reason it wasn't her fault but that his relationship it's his fault for not doing anything (ok, maybe he's right but Chiaki was far too gone with cheating with the professor so even if Tsugaru didn't exist things would have gone far worse for Fuji because he wouldn't have anyone to rely on and Chiaki STILL would be cheating IMO).
Fuji tells her he needs Tsugaru on his life and their story ends with her getting impregnated for real this time as she still apologize to Chiaki in her mind.

Meanwhile the professor and Chiaki continue their affair but this time Chiaki is the one wearing the pants in their relationship, I guess because the professor is aware he fucked up a marriage and if word goes out it will blow up and destroy his life for real, that's why he seems in panic and even offers to divorce his wife to take responsibility when she sees how Chiaki doesn't seems to care about her engagement being called off and saying it's all her own fault, he begs her to not go away because now that she's no longer engaged he might think she has no reason to stay around anymore and she basically dominates him from now and on while it ends with Chiaki saying she's similar to Tsugaru and I can't help but think how warped the image Chiaki has of her sister is in her mind.

I agree with johnsmy here, no you are not, Tsugaru didn't have an cheated just because of someone talking to your crush, she never got in affairs with married men like Chiaki is now and the one time Tsugaru did was a poor attempt to save Chiaki's relationship from a fall out she didn't know already was on its final stages while Chiaki continues her affair with a married man just because she feels good and because she thinks that's how her sister behaves.
Author skipped any form of confrontation and reduced it to just 2 single panels and 3 text boxes *shrugs*.

The true winners here are Fuji and Tsugaru.
Fuji found a woman who actually loves him and would never betray him.
Tsugaru finally found a place to belong after living a careless life with no goal when she realized that she's just lonely.
Chiaki meanwhile is an inmoral whore who likely will jump the new dick that makes her fancy to keep feeding her sister complex and justify her own behavior.
The professor is just a fuck boy that can't live without Chiaki now.
Extra page is just Chiaki with an evil smile and Tsugaru with a warm smile caressing her own belly.

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The story of the sisters, the chapter of the younger sister is one more chapter than the elder sister.
In fact, the chapter of the elder sister is better.
If the elder sister could have more chapter,it would be better.

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lmao the cheating hoe is not only a hoe, she blackmails the guy she's banging too. First story doesn't work as a NTR plot. This hoe is the furthest thing from desirable. Good riddance.

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After more than five years of waiting, Kiasa was careless. Maybe he just noticed that he had created this work before, but he ended the series in such a perfunctory way. Maybe he would go to serialize his other comics. But as you said, Kiasa is a real coward who dare not face his own characters. I can understand all those who wait and think about this work, Kiasa is really disappointing.
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<br>Thank you, kiasa. Looking at the title of the work, we all think that you want to portray tsugaru and chiaki as both positive and negative, and transform with them. But actually, you fucked it up. Chiaki has become a hysterical bitch that frightens all characters. The professor has also fucked up. He can't live without this crazy bitch now, but it's his own fault. Chiaki thinks she is similar to tsugaru? No, she is just a fucking bitch. Fuji's marriage was broken by this bitch. Tsugaru finally thought she had broken the love of her dear sister. No, this hysterical bitch finally destroyed all of her life and is still defending herself. However, Fuji and Tsugaru have a real love, and the professor's behavior will eventually be retributive, while Chiaki has become completely "the same person as Tsugaru" as she thought. No, it's all the hysteria of this bitch and the expression of Kiasa's incompetence. Finally let the people who pay attention to this work disappointed.

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So thanks to all the people who broke down the other parts of the story and i have 1 question: Are people mad that there was no confrontation cause, to me the people who needed to win won and compared to other ntr(?) Stories that's better then most i see.

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@vjbeal96
There's no climax, it just ends that's why when you add it to the over exposure of Chiaki you can't help but feel annoyed and unsatisfied.

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@ Wilfriback, johnsmy, ye japanese have a cucked mentality, a normal ending with more common sense would have been too much of a win for the character apparently, need more bitterness, always.
@Juddeau japanese hentai author are not confrontational, having a confrontation is an exception unless it's for cuck ending purposes. It was one of the most proactive stories when the wronged party did something however author had to give most L at the end to compensate, they love cheaters and ntr in their stories over there, I can't fathom their logic.

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first chapter is translated to english 276217

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