Translated by: Rinruririn (https://rinruririn.web.fc2.com/ [email protected] Rinruritrans#9974) for a bounty.
Edited by: Scumbini (me)
RAW: /g/1897561/38de099dd8/

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p39. "Then let me make you have lots of different faces until morning..." Sentence reads awkward as heck. Consider rephrasing?

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Honestly the Lean CR Scans version has better dialouge than this one, but this one also has some good ones too. If I can just combine them together...
Ex: "I'm paying you back so you don't have to hold back" should be substituted by "This is my way of thanking you so don't hold back"
"Then let me make you have lots of different faces until morning..." -> "Then, can you show me all sorts of faces until morning?"
and etc.

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This isn't even uncensored, shoulda just re-translated the one with rough grammar tbh since it have uncensored

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I just hope this continues. There is a surprisingly lack of Vanilla Gyaru loving in which the MC isn't a major douchebag or the Gyaru being totally aggro against the MC.

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I'm glad someone redid the translation, I've realized that I'm not really a good writer.

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@PsychicDoom

The line follows from 14, 26, 27 and 36. The male lead likes her sexy faces and wants to make her have more sexy faces.

@minnazzo
"I'm paying you back so you don't have to hold back" should be substituted by "This is my way of thanking you so don't hold back"

I chose the former because it makes her sound more rough, the way a gyaru is supposed to be. On reflection, she's always soft with the male lead, so perhaps there was no reason to do so.

"Then let me make you have lots of different faces until morning..." -> "Then, can you show me all sorts of faces until morning?"

The former line is exactly what he says. I'm not comfortable with changing the line to the extent you have suggested.

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Bus driver probably noticed it all, yet he remained silent because he actually cares about decreasing birthrate

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If she reacted like that from the bus simply hitting a bump...

Imagine if he takes her off-roading....

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Does anyone know if it's still possible to buy the official release? The dlsite link here and the fanza link on the artist's twitter at https://twitter.com/bonhoban02/status/1385508094495522816 error out...

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