The story is a little bit complicated but I like it :)

Base +18, Knipol +6

Yea this is so almost good. But the story is way to thick and paced really poorly. There's scene changes where it feels like I missed a bunch of exposition or do nothing to provide any. This artist usually does better with shorter stories. Holy shit though they scratch every bullet point when it comes to fetishes. This one especially.

Base +6, Knipol +6, Shellstrom +10, gnawspit +6