[Jay Naylor] Brooke Goes to College [Ongoing (Part 4)]

Posted on 06 June 2023, 23:14 by: Buster D.

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An ongoing black-and-white adult comic from artist Jay Naylor.
It follows his character Brooke Reed, first appearing in the comic Twice As Hot, as she explores the college environment as well as her own sexual interests.

Artist Pages:
https://www.patreon.com/jaynaylor/
https://www.patreon.com/jrnarts/
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/fisk/
https://jrn-arts.tumblr.com/
https://twitter.com/JayDrawins

Posted on 27 July 2017, 03:28 by: Randomness-Wat

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Posted on 27 July 2017, 06:13 by: Dragon Writer

I don't understand what the confusion is? She's a raccoon. like, this is just a sketch comic, you aren't gong to see her markings.

Posted on 05 August 2017, 08:22 by: TheViktor

How is it that the only character I actually enjoy in a Jay Naylor comic, is the fat cat chick who we are supposed to mock and laugh at when in reality she feels more down to earth and realistic than the others? XD

Posted on 05 August 2017, 09:50 by: JasonGareth

The fat chick is hilarious. I love it.

Posted on 07 August 2017, 17:12 by: Slothulu

jay really doesn't know how to write likable characters. we're suppose to be mocking the fat chick but she's everyone's favorite. lmao

Posted on 08 August 2017, 22:03 by: BlueRoses23

This roomie, with her sass, would definitely be a friend of mine.

But yeah, we're supposed to hate (or at least mock/dehumanize) this fat kitty--who IS clever and also funny, insightful, and far from beastly--and she ends up being the best girl.

Posted on 24 August 2017, 16:01 by: randomletterjumble

Meh, call her bluff. Alright, bye, you know how to get in touch if you ever decide to be less of a pretentious ass.

Oh, who am I kidding. This is a Naylor comic from the last decade. *sigh* Time for another read where I pretend the dialogue doesn't exist.

Posted on 16 September 2017, 16:48 by: tilesqual

Twenty hentai bucks says that this unknown texter is actually just her fat roomie

Posted on 02 November 2017, 03:06 by: BlueRoses23

@shtzandgiggles

No, he doesn't hate fat people -- he hates fat WOMEN.

If you look through his comics, there are a great deal of male characters with big ol' guts (including the thick daddy professor wolf shown here) that are treated normally, but any female characters more than 10 pounds overweight are mocked or dehumanized (like the roommate shown here). And never ever shown in sexual scenes (with the exception of one page in Puppy Love where the main guy was boning his BBW fiance while fantasizing about a skinny girl that was far more gifted and had a superior demeanor).

Posted on 31 December 2017, 03:26 by: seestoff

@TheViktor Seriously. I'm not even primarily a furry but he makes me want to get better at drawing and give the community what they obviously want. Not even his long time fans seem satisfied by the OOOH SO TABOO direction.

Posted on 01 January 2018, 05:33 by: oozyrat

Jay Naylor somehow manages to make these characters more boring with each passing page
Like oh wow a dominant female nymphomaniac Jay's really treading into some unknown territory here wow

Posted on 20 January 2018, 17:15 by: Angel_of_Lulz

Jay took a decently appealing potential f/f story and turned it into some strange mess of pointless fighting and nonsensical characters...oh well

Posted on 20 January 2018, 17:37 by: NapalmFlame

This got super stupid, real fast

Posted on 20 January 2018, 21:49 by: MetaSnake

Fucking hell, I'd love to live in this fantasy world that Naylor lives in.

Remember, all women are driven purely by sexual desires and exist to manipulate and control.

Posted on 29 January 2018, 21:38 by: randomletterjumble

Cathy continues to be the best part of this comic.

Posted on 30 January 2018, 03:23 by: oozyrat

jay naylor unintentionally making the only likable character she's ever written by specifically trying to make her unlikable is fucking fantastic

Posted on 30 January 2018, 18:17 by: TheViktor

I honestly had to read the comic from start to the latest page just to confirm something about our now beloved Cathy.
And yes, it really seems like Naylor did in fact create Cathy as someone that TvTropes likes to call the Hate Sink which is and I'm quoting, is a character whose intended role in the story (the role the authors made for him/her) is to be so despicable that the audience wants him or her to fail just as much as they want the heroes to succeed, unquote. Or maybe the Friend Nobody Likes, The Scrappy or The Zoidberg. Hell, maybe it's little bit of a combination but then it would imply that Naylor actually intended that for Cathy.
Now I don't really mean to diss Naylor's writing (well not as much as I normally do anyway) since I admit that I am not a really good writer myself as shown in my rewrite of The Itch but it is really fascinating to see the introduction of Cathy depicted as a comedic and almost downright insulting character as a foil for Brooke's expectations. Along the way, we are supposed dislike this character being annoying and all around unlikable obstacle for Brooke's supposedly inner conflict.
But I have no freaking clue if this is what Naylor expected or not, but I like to think that he still thinks that we all hate the character that he wrote for us to hate as much he hates women with that look that Cathy has. Though I am not really sure if that is the true, but in the end he ended created pretty the only true character in the entire Naylor universe... Until he decides to actually make a comic with Cathy which ends up butchering everything we like about the character into yet another sexually manipulative and driven girl who wants to be controlled by a Naylor selfinserted character.
Maybe it's because we love how down to the earth Cathy is, actually has some taste and quirks that we would end up loving. Hell, now it is confirmed that she may be a bi ( or maybe lesbian based on what we saw on The Mind of Brooke Reed) and she thinks that Brooke is not her type.
That... is freaking awesome. Naylor made a character for us to root for rather than... Whatever the hell is going on with Brooke. I mean... What even IS going on? Am I to assume that there will be this... I don't even know, gateway to female domination over men the overly sexual supernatural way or something? That Naylor thinks that college is REALLY like a source for sexual experience and exploration, thus forming them for the rest of their lives if they will be dom, sub or losers according to Naylor's ideals? Either way, I am kind of freaking out that maybe Cathy will end up a victim for whatever is to come...
Something PLEASE explain this to me.

Oh and by the way, I just looked at U-18Chan thread for this comic and I found this really hilariously accurate list about what everybody has been saying about this comic XD

1. People complaining about the fat roomate.
2. People complaining about the beliefs of the fat roommate.
3. People complaining about Jay Naylor making a charicature of how some people view feminists on the internet (missing the joke).
4. People criticizing Naylor's dialogue (but that's just standard, ZOMG, the dialogue in this fictional furry porno comic is SOOOOOOO unrealistic and awful)
5. People complaining about Naylor's politics that has seeped into a comic about a nympho raccoon going to college. (i.e. ZOMG, HIS OBJECTIVIST COCK JIZZ IS SPLATTERED ALL OVER THIS)
6. People complaining about Naylor's fetishes
7. People somehow finding a small drawing error no one would have noticed without zooming in and complaining that Jay Naylor no longer cares.
7. People complaining about the character development of characters in a fictional furry porno comic.
8. People complaining about the people complaining.
9. People complaining about Jay's sense of humor, because humor is entirely objective and you are the sole decider of what is funny and what isn't.
10. People complaining about the people complaining about the people complaining.
11. People arguing with the people who are complaining
12. People arguing with the people who are complaining with the people who are complaining.
13. People complaining that everyone should shut the fuck up and if they don't like it, they shouldn't read it.
14. People complaining about the previous people and trying to justify constant complaining about the comic.
15. At least 127 posts, asking for an update.
16. 25 images, and 678 other posts
17. People calling Naylor a cuck
18. People calling other people cucks.
19. People trying to argue with me about making the list, insulting my a) mother, b) intelligence, c) sexual orientation, or d) my sexual fetishes (I'll be a cuck, I bet.)

Did I forget anything? Add on if you like!

Last edited on 30 January 2018, 18:52.

Posted on 31 January 2018, 17:06 by: Angel_of_Lulz

Clearly the secret to Jay writing likable characters is trying to make them unlikable. Can we just focus on Cathy now?

Posted on 22 February 2018, 03:58 by: Reaverbot11

I don't think I have ever wanted porn characters to shut the fuck up more than I have in this comic. Jay Naylor is like jeff buckley crossed with your annoying alt-right neighbor

Posted on 22 February 2018, 06:52 by: ecruavenger

When the comments of a sketchy cartoon porn website are saying that you're a politically insufferable creep, you know you've fucked up badly somewhere.

Posted on 22 February 2018, 16:45 by: anonymouslyours

And to think that this comic actually had a decent start.

Posted on 02 April 2018, 23:46 by: mrkitteh

Just want to point out the Females Only tag hasn't been valid for a while now since Bruce, a male, was performing cunnilingus and now Francis with the (currently) new page.

Posted on 29 May 2018, 02:41 by: MetaSnake

So I'm assuming that she was planning for the relationship to sour. Either that or this some grand over-arching plan to get her to do whatever worthless wants.

Either way, this fucking stupid.

Posted on 29 May 2018, 13:20 by: BlueRoses23

And how'd she take it?
Uh... I think they're dating now.
FUCK.

Posted on 29 May 2018, 20:53 by: anonymouslyours

I think Naylor forgot what he was writing about and just winged it. Only way to explain it AFAIK

Posted on 01 June 2018, 06:08 by: randomChar

This is going way to fucking slow

Posted on 20 March 2019, 06:31 by: moximoore

I... I don't quite think that's how lesbianism works.

Posted on 22 March 2019, 17:43 by: BlueRoses23

Ah, so that's The Great Tempting, featuring Alicia's booty.

(She was in a pregnancy series and is one of Kaori's mooks.)

Maybe Naylor will throw us a curveball and have Brooke actually *gasp* talk to her bf about her bi-curious feelings and see if he'd be ok with her playing with girls.

Posted on 31 March 2019, 03:45 by: 50m3d00d

how can you tell a porn artist is a right-libertarian? don't worry, you'll know

Posted on 21 May 2019, 16:40 by: TheViktor

Okay, gotta admit. Even if I knew what was coming, I did chuckle at the 35th page...

Last edited on 23 May 2019, 10:55.

Posted on 24 May 2019, 16:04 by: BlueRoses23

Ever been so sexually frustrated that even your shoulder angel and devil can't focus?

Yeesh, Brooke is weirdly focused on being normal when she's already had an ongoing affair with an older married guy and fantasizing about eating lady-ass on the daily. You're not normal and you have a supportive yet flexible boyfriend, girl. Live your life.

Last edited on 08 June 2019, 03:28.

Posted on 08 June 2019, 06:09 by: the14th

I really would love to know where the hell Naylor got the ideas about women he has. Especially when it comes to lesbians.

Posted on 06 November 2019, 22:30 by: omocha-no-one

A) FUCKING and THINKING is a bad combination.
B) PORN and POLITICS is even worse.

Posted on 21 February 2020, 00:25 by: Villhadig

I find it hilarious how we were supposed to mock Cathy but instead she is actually the more -sane- one in all of this that is Naylor's fuckin' weird ass world view.

I still remember this cunt's long ass comic he did, Better Days I think it was, and the main character got in trouble for writing some offensive essay that the teacher brought up, and the mother read through it, one of the passages was how the native Americans were savages and deserved what came and she -smiled- at it all and then berated the teacher back. That was fuckin' weird...

Posted on 25 June 2020, 07:38 by: randomletterjumble

Wait. Wait. Wait wait. Waitwaitwait.

The cynical character who believes relationships are folly and everyone is just lust driven *isn't* being vindicated and being rewarded with sex? In a Naylor comic?!

I... I need a drink...

Last edited on 12 August 2020, 22:58.

Posted on 14 July 2020, 16:08 by: BlueRoses23

I think the main thing bugging me here is the implication that you can't have a loving and genuine relationship with someone AND ALSO have the presence of kinks/fetishes.

Yes, you can have a vanilla/normie relationship. Yes, you can have a relationship that's purely about a particular fetish. And yes, you can very much have both (with the same person, or with others if that's your agreed-upon dynamic).

Also: being jaded sexually is an attitude, not a lifestyle, and can apply to any and all types of relationships.

This binary that Naylor is imposing makes no sense and is causing Brooke unnecessary conflict.

Posted on 16 October 2020, 05:05 by: randomletterjumble

Seesh, it's about time. God was that slap satisfying.

Posted on 16 October 2020, 13:33 by: Bookrat15

YES!
Slap that bitch!

Posted on 24 October 2020, 18:41 by: Villhadig

Oh hey, for once one of Naylor's stereotype characters getting what's coming to them, a hard slap across the goddamn face.

Posted on 08 July 2021, 08:42 by: BlueRoses23

p. 63

Judgmental Giraffe is watching you masturbate.

Posted on 29 March 2022, 22:12 by: BlueRoses23

Why does everyone want a piece of me says the slender, big-titty, nerdy-cute, 420 piebald rabbit girl.

Why, indeed.

Posted on 11 May 2022, 07:53 by: shamful7

Please bring back incest to the story, its been awhile

Posted on 02 June 2022, 00:53 by: Buster D.

Updated with Chapter 3, Page 27
Pepper: I've come to make an announcement, Jalen Reed's a bitch-ass motherfucker-

Posted on 10 June 2022, 10:35 by: grlt

In Samuel L. Jackson voice: This motherfucker!

Posted on 07 September 2022, 21:56 by: BlueRoses23

Coach Swanson could've been nicer about it, but he's right - from the start, he was upfront about his intentions when they first started humping. It's always tricky when one half of a casual-sex relationship starts wanting more than the other, and it definitely stings if/when they have to end it because of that.

Brooke has hopefully learned some important lessons here:

1. When people tell you who they are, believe them.

2. Avoid pursuing unavailable partners - it doesn't end well.

(Like I know Naylor is trying to shit on Brooke again for daring to have Feelings, but the main flaw in her plan was that she chased a married-with-kids guy who flat-out told her that he wouldn't change his life for her - and was then bamboozled when he did exactly what he said.)

Posted on 08 April 2023, 08:09 by: redragon1990

okay, polly is gonna be fun times

Posted on 13 June 2023, 23:30 by: leogamer00

so this still going, why ?

Posted on 07 November 2023, 11:00 by: sealawyer

So, no more English updates. But if you know Spanish or Russian you seem good to go. I actually enjoyed this one.

Posted on 11 November 2023, 21:12 by: whichdude

Yeah. Seems like English side just can't help but criticize story in a porn comic to the point that artists is just done with them.

Posted on 22 November 2023, 12:35 by: Arcanine813

BOY IT SURE WOULD BE NICE TO HAVE THIS FUCKING UPDATED. :/

Posted on 17 December 2023, 15:49 by: Arcanine813

I guess this is dead in terms of people updating here. Even tho if there's a spanish version being updated we know that they have the fucking english original. :/
Seriously, why isn't this being updated? Did the op stop pledging? or did they just give up for some reason?

Last edited on 17 December 2023, 21:30.

Posted on 24 May 2024, 12:39 by: lewdflan

lol this 7 year old comic is still going on

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