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[DarkFlame] Alice Miyamoto - That Time I Became a Succubus - Part 12 - The New Mistress

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Posted:2023-06-19 17:08
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Length:771 pages
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Posted on 19 June 2023, 17:08 by:   Konata-chan    PM
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It's finally heeeeere! The release of the new chapter of TTIBAS! You have waited three months to know how the chapter would continue, and now you will be able to know.

A quick recap of what happened last chapter in case you don't remember: Alice was desvastated at seing how Yuuki was treating her, so she tried invading Yuuki's dreams to see if she could get her back somehow. But Claire was already expecting her! After Claire and Yuuki had some fun with Alice, treating her like a slave and putting on an outfit to enhance the pleasure she felt, Alice was told by Mae the name of the person who did all this, it was Claire! Sadly, the price of this information was that Mae had a latex dildo growing out of her body!

In this chapter, we will know what Claire did to Mae to corrupt her like that. And we'll also know what happened afterwards! Will Alice be able to get rid of the suit that Claire put on her? Will Mae resist the pleasure? Will they chase down Claire to free Yuuki? Get ready to know what happens!

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Posted on 19 June 2023, 17:12 by:   yifuyifu    PM
Score +14
ohhhhhhhh!people who stay up night always get their gifts!
Posted on 19 June 2023, 17:13 by:   mikegood    PM
Score +7
太棒了,作者大大好耶

太棒了,作者大大好耶
Posted on 19 June 2023, 18:39 by:   Optitron    PM
Score +21
I want to start by saying Mae was the absolute MVP of this chapter. Her plan may not have been the best or started out that well, but she made the most of a bad situation, protected Maya, gathered valuable intel from the enemy, and managed to keep her wits about her long enough to escape while hitting (copy) Claire in the face not once, but twice. Even if things didn't work out too well for her in the end, that's deserving of praise in my book (especially the elbowing/kicking Claire bit). I think Mae has more than earned that promotion from minion to fellow succubus she was talking about, assuming she is correct that such a thing is possible and as long as Alice somehow manages to pull off a (very) come-from-behind victory.

Which kinda brings me to what I found to be the most concerning part of this chapter: the ending. I don't know about anyone else, but to me that felt an awful lot like the beginnings of a deus ex machina in those last 8 pages, which makes me very worried about where this story is headed next. I mean, Alice got herself into a pretty bad situation there, and if this is the start of her getting bailed out with zero long-term consequences for her mistakes, then that will be really disappointing for me. I want to see Alice win really bad, but I also want her to earn her victory, and so far it doesn't feel like she's done anything to achieve that. Also, the timing of this new arrival was way too convenient. Hopefully there'll be a good explanation for that somewhere in the next chapter, because the alternative is having to accept that she just coincidentally arrived right at the most crucial moment, and that is just beyond the limits of my suspension of disbelief.

Also – and this is just a personal request for me – please stop torturing Annie. For whatever reason I fell in love with her character when she was first properly introduced (probably an empathic response to her desire to be with her friends who she felt were leaving her behind... that or the fact she's a gamer girl), and seeing everything Claire has done to her has been absolutely heartbreaking. I really, truly hope that if fortunes are reversed at some point later in the series and Annie has Claire at her mercy that she'll be allowed to do whatever she wants as payback for all the agony she's endured, but in the meantime can she just not suffer anymore. Please.
Posted on 19 June 2023, 19:31 by:   膜法少女姜    PM
Score +9
这个作者的作品一般最后都是女主赢
Posted on 19 June 2023, 20:11 by:   JakeGonzales    PM
Score +12
Man, Claire is such a cringe villain. Hope she loses so bad she just turns to dust.
Posted on 19 June 2023, 21:03 by:   Im2sad    PM
Score +1
Yeah, she is cringe indeed. Though im curious, how alices sister is gonna turn it around
Posted on 19 June 2023, 23:12 by:   constanding    PM
Score +18
当大家还在讨论爱丽丝和克莱尔哪个能获取胜利的时候,我还在期待梅的老妈能不能再有魅魔的世界里力挽狂澜呢~笑
Posted on 20 June 2023, 00:36 by:   Temp demp    PM
Score +1
I have got to say Alice's "sister" popping up as a cliffhanger happened at way to opportune of a time like comedically so. Also I've not really liked how much darker your stories have gotten poor Annie she didn't deserve any of what happened to her the darker thing also applies to the light in the dark to a lesser degree but thats kinda a big part of this story so it gets a pass.
Posted on 20 June 2023, 03:43 by:   NekoTaiho    PM
Score +7
A thought on how it might not be a bit of a deus ex machina... What if there was a succubus behind the choker that turned Alice into a succubus? She might've had a copy of herself planted in Alice's mind (much like Claire's been doing) with a number of conditions that could "awaken" it, such as what happened here. And being the succubus responsible for Alice's conversion choker would make Alice her "little sister."

We'd get Alice saved, and she gets a mentor that'll teach her what she needs to know to stay out of Claire's clutches and eventually deal with Claire and save the others. I mean, at this point, she's gotten blindsided multiple times, pretty much lost everyone to Claire, and is at her lowest point. Perfect time to go, "so, want to learn how to fix this, save your girl, and make it harder to happen again?" and having a training arc.
Posted on 20 June 2023, 15:28 by:   CF7758758    PM
Score +6
太绝望了,爱丽丝呗打的毫无还手之地,导致作者不得不空降个角色救场
Posted on 20 June 2023, 16:25 by:   yeamico    PM
Score +8
观感有点下降,这个救场来的太随意了
Posted on 20 June 2023, 16:47 by:   Gksama    PM
Score +12
这个角色不是空降的 这个红发的大姐在以前的短篇里已经出场过了
Posted on 20 June 2023, 17:02 by:   expesstrain684    PM
Score +5
没办法的办法吧,毕竟还必须要出续集的
Posted on 21 June 2023, 02:14 by:   Elnormeme    PM
Score -7
没出路了,只好机械降神了

没出路了,只好机械降神了
Posted on 22 June 2023, 05:52 by:   user6131    PM
Score +6
I agree that claire has long outstayed her welcome. the way she has continued to out play alice at every turn and have such petty motivations for doing so really makes her insufferable as a character. So if alice's sister comes in, takes care of claire, or better yet loses interest in Alice and goes off to torture/dominate Claire for all of Eternity, I am all for it. I'd also be up for her helping alice get Yuuki back.
Posted on 28 June 2023, 05:24 by:   Dragoon 2502    PM
Score +7
The story is Super Mega Ultra Epic Supreme GOD Level, although Mae was the MVP of this chapter of TTIBAS, something tells me something is coming Super Mega Ultra Epic Supreme GOD Level and that's why I give it a 10, keep it up and I hope to see more comics like this and one more thing and that is that on page 509 you see that not only Mae has been Corrupted by Claire now because Claire can make copies of her makes me think that maybe Maya was also Corrupted right before Mae came back?
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Posted on 08 July 2023, 20:28 by:   JakeGonzales    PM
Score +6
Hey, we still don't know who gave Alice the succubus suit. Maybe the answer wil be revealed on the next volume.
Posted on 04 August 2023, 15:01 by:   luckywaist    PM
Score +5
安妮也太惨了,一直被当出气包虐

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