Fan translation , no artistic knowledge

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01052692.html

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I didn't know Google was such a Circle Spice fan, that's high praise.

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THANK GOD this is the sequel I have been waiting for. You're my hero for posting this.

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Just NOO. I will wait for a proper translation.

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Lol, the hero this site deserves

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just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

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I don't see the problem with the machine translation, as long as this is deleted once we have a decent one.

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Fan translation, my ass. You didn't translate shit. Shitty MTL did.

If MTL fuckers could just stop uploading their crap and clog up galleries that would be great.

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I usually download ehentai manga from another site which the tag is not continuously updating and doesn't have a review. Fuck, this is disaster. Maybe you can add some ads as a more obvious bullshit mark that i don't have to read it.

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@ usrname123

the quick and dirty is that making bad translations actively discourages making good ones. there is little value in translating something that's already translated because the majority of people either dont care and can settle for very low quality products or arent likely to engage so you wouldnt even know they dont like it

not only that saying delete it when a proper one comes out is also dumb because it's like someone selling a bootleg of your product ahead of your product's release, people already have/consumed a thing that basically fills your products role and while your product is better most people will likely have had their fill and moved on, that's value a proper translation is never gonna get back IF it's ever made

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it's hard not to enjoy the irony

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If you don't know shit about it, it's better to not touch it at all. Translators generally lose interest when they don't get to be the first one to upload translated work. It's why they work for like at least a day without getting paid or whatnot, to be the translator of a work they really like. I don't know if someone's been working on this but if there was someone, congratulations because you've ruined their day.

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@Innyinny Dont you have a Circle Spice story finish or something? Instead of making fun of this.

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ask vonel to do it for you

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@innyinny

please bro we need you to come back to save us from this one. we need that innyinny fire, that innyinny passion. just one more job bro, come back to us

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@Mr_Person Don't bother sucking his dick for content. It won't make him translate anything faster. He couldn't care less about us. As seen in his messages on this thread. He is a salty, sensitive little man.

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