Really wish the comic would just focus on the main story and not have so much filler.

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Part 16. Getting boring now. When is the MC bitch going to get gangbanged?

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EDIT: No point talking sense to menchildren.

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@HRPG Why are you still here then? In your own words you said that last brief interesting thing this series had was in episode 10. Yet, here you are 6 epsiodes later still looking at new pages and even taking the time to type up a large comment complaining about it.

I just wish that if people want to complain about a comic then just be adults and not follow the comic or artist anymore. But instead your being a manchild about it and complaining.

As for me, I like the style and the art. proportions of body parts arent ridiculously oversized like some artists tend to do. As for the story, yes if you want a quick 50-60 page comic then this isn't for you. But if you like slow burn and seeing other aspects in a location other then the MC then its pretty good. Not many artists have a series going this long.

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You're kinda agreeing with him, to be honest.

You used the word "MC". That's basically a white flag from the get-go. If you're already substituting an epithet in place of someone's name, it means that its quality is suspect by default. Even when people comment on pornos, they at least get the name of the actors right. Any piece of fiction that has its base using stuff like "MC" or even "the [attribute] girl" is pretty much proving anyone who degrades the story correct because it's not even memorably BAD enough for you to even be interested enough to commit a name to memory.

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In my opinion, the only reasons to leave a comment are:
#1. to show appreciation so the artist will continue their work;
#2. to offer a suggestion that the artist might follow in future work;
#3. to engage with other readers who share my interests.
Per #1, I think this series is great. The story is evolving with new characters and perspectives. The art is sexy and realistic enough to be believable except, per #2 I wish the sons to be drawn larger as they would likely be IRL.
Per #3, the five star rating is available if you don't like the work. Love it or leave it.
Cheers.

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EDIT: No point talking sense to menchildren.

Last edited on 13 September 2023, 20:42.

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Imagine getting this upset that your NTR fetish isn't being catered to.

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When is the rest because I love it manga

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