Your story is quite promising but the way you talk about the MC in chapter 1 it's a bit long. Make the reader feel boring and don't know what you want to talk about the story. Your art very potential, hope you can improve in the future

Base +6, Mad-Kruger -6, wjj12138 +6, Trav7 -4, DasNiveau +6, EienShouko +11, TheDragonRider +4

What a wonderful story! Maybe you can put this chapter in Deviantart where we can communicate about you and your work and not just comment^_^!

Base +3, Cdd123321 +3, yfaiu +4

If you want to have early access to the new chapters you can support me on my Fansly

https://www.fansly.com/AndreaTG

All opinions are always welcome :)

Last edited on 23 February 2024, 16:54.

Base +1, fag1234 +6, Lahha +6, kellim +6, myoxy +10

When will the rest come out?

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艸 草 Www

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I can't believe I read 237 pages and didn't even get to see him get railed by cock yet smh

Base +6, mdk101 +6, bipo8 -4

237 pages of nothing, absolute nothing, if this gets updated in the future with you know AN ACTUAL STORY skip ahead of page 237, you pretty much won't miss anything

Base +6, *Blackshard* +10, Afganitia +5, eskhahe +6, zykyne +6, Laughing Orange +6

Loved the tricky part at the end!

Base +4, Ciano21 +4

Loved it so far! can't wait to see the rest!

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Can you upload the man of the house part 3

Base +1, akkks -6

I like the story so far, with it's potential for crazy situations. With the long introduction changes and influence of circumstances are much more apparent.
By the way, if somebody cried for some time, their voice will sound husky like they had a cold. It quickly goes away, but in confrontation with PE teacher it would also work for interpretation. It sort of tipped the following official excuse.

Last edited on 02 September 2022, 20:41.

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A mega Chapter, Thank You. This story is becoming really interesting, Well Done.

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Part 5 can you upload now

Base +2, qqkk077 +6

草，怎么突然有中文消防栓

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Loving it. Keep up the good work.

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:O what is this

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shittons of filler, but the parts that are good are good.

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Literally 1000 pages in now and he finally gets his first kiss so I guess we're on track for him to suck his first cock by page 3500 and finally get fucked at page 6000.

Base +6, PregnantWhoreFucker +6, qqkk077 +6, kellim +6, wertzu2112 +6

Unfortunately it's just the quality of 90's polygons.

Base +6, PregnantWhoreFucker +6

why is there always a triangle on the nose？

Base +6, Ciano21 +4, mar-bcrle +6

people pretty mad at this but I don't really mind the slow pace and many pages so long as it's not a bunch of filler frames showing useless movement.

Base +8, carjua +7, worldstoned +6, Gynem +6, TheDragonRider +4

I love this story and don't mind the pace one bit as it allows us to observe the many different aspects of Annie's transformation and relationships with others.

Last edited on 24 February 2024, 17:25.

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love ya! @monOINKa

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什么时候完全变成女性？

Base +6, 快手迪卢克 +4

can not wait for the day to see his tiny cock out of that cage, and maybe for even a full feminization which I'd love but I get that's not everyones thing

Base +4, PregnantWhoreFucker +6

Is it just me or does everything seem to go off the rails at chapter 6? I don't know why, but after that chapter I just cannot get back into the story and cannot figure out why. It's weird.

Base +7, 祈源光 +1

Okay, the story is slow, the pacing is strange. The english is good but is the author's second language. Some of the poses are hard to interpret...

but this is a fantastic forced feminization manga.

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20+= /g/2981248/a4ad722c82/

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Look, I love good dialogue, but this is way too much dialogue - every line is more verbose than it needs to be. Bailing out at page 230.

Base +6, DarkCocoon +6