Hi guys iam a big fan of adult manga though language comes in my way,so i recently started translating work so if you guys need any work translated email me at [email protected] i would really appreciate and also if any of you want to support author here is the link https://www.dlsite.com/maniax-touch/work/=/product_id/RJ01065489.html its only available in japanese language though thank you.

just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

Additional notes: PG 16 top right second sentence is a bit too small and bottom right first sentence is being overlapped by second sentence

Base +7, Alyssa quenn +1, theboredotaku +7, Coledas Ukgent +15

Comments from 4chan
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>no mind control
>no blackmail
>no succumbing to the power of cock in 2 pages
>mom NTR kino
>impregnation shot that actually goes on to show the woman pregnant
Finally some good fucking NTR.
>>8246388
god damn cliffhanger.
>>8246388
>ntr situation initially starts by accident
>the bull is actually a decent guy
Damn, it hits all my soft spots.
>>8247213
Best kind of NTR

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Alyssa quenn I like that trying translating but like Mr.Heartbeat said you need to proofread. like page 7 where the mom say mom i wish the same for you too, i think either the kids name should have been were mom was the sentence make sense.

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