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Japanese RAW: /g/2763734/bf22a33d75/

Base +21, rikudosennin +6, ADIN0 +10

This story is weird. It seems like a self-insert weirdly specific fantasy rather than plain fetish fodder. Probably the mangaka got a commission.

Base +3, Vormik -7, georgenorthern +6, Mr. Grey +6, kaerFlanA +6, thicgothgf +5, abrickhouse +6, rikudosennin -6, k_2553472 +6, likeyouknowwhatever +6, shadowknight007 -7

Well that was weird.

Base +8, Vormik -7, georgenorthern +6, yapzp +6, rikudosennin -6

This don't make sense.

Base +6, Vormik -7, georgenorthern +6, yapzp +6, kaerFlanA +6, rikudosennin -6

Classic ''"ugly old bastard who never got a woman but has a big dick and will rape woman to make them fall for him"''.
Well at least I don't feel bad for any of the characters because of how bad the writing and plot is in this one.

Base +1, Wilfriback +20, anonymousMember +6, Vormik +7, georgenorthern +6, your_name +6, Mr. Grey +6, kaerFlanA +6, thicgothgf +5, abrickhouse +6, rikudosennin -6, likeyouknowwhatever +6

Pretty good actually I got what I wanted out of netorare. For me the kink is when she's stolen away from mc, and stays with new guy. Badly written yes, but actually had what I look for in netorare.

5 stars.

Base +7, sonnytag123 +18, Mr. Grey -6, Yossarian762 +7, Jerkinsos +6, rikudosennin +6, Alcrian +7, likeyouknowwhatever -6, Brego1 +6

so did she run away without saying goodbye or a divorce?

Base +7, likeyouknowwhatever +6

Let me take stock.
-Guy loses girl to old guy and will never know why.
-No way the baby is his.
-Girl doesn't send him DVDs to fap to where she says she loves him but his junk is too small.
-He can either spend his whole life wondering what he did wrong, or move on and hopefully find someone else.
-He's not homeless and doesn't know exactly where his ex lives, so he can't go there and sadfap to her with the old guy.

Dude came out ahead when you really think about it.

Base +21, Jerkinsos +6, henta1lover0 +2, Zantos +7, Mr_Wesker +7, Black Apocalypse +6

One of the laziest NTR I've read in a while. Everything is just so dumb to the point it borders to weird territory like some folks have commented. It's very nonsensical, ridiculous and worst of all boring. The art isn't that great and the sex is mediocre at best, I see no reason to actually enjoy this aside from rape I guess? But this one is so boring not fun at all.

-The girl doesn't do jack shit: Like absolutely fucking nothing: She didn't bother fighting back, she didn't try to actually run away, she didn't push away the guy at all, for fuck's sake this is no different than sleeping sex at this point. She let herself be raped for days and was fucking released like holy shit, are you kidding me? You are free and your next move is do nothing? No police? Not telling your husband? Can't you at least take a fucking pill? How does this woman function? So now she don't give a shit about her husband anymore? She's so fucking stupid she left her husband instead of doing something.

- The luckiest old man: The most pathetic of old men who wire taps bags to fap to chicks being fucked like holy shit tell me his luck isn't S rank? The girl lets herself get raped, then impregnated and finally leaves her husband for you just because you told her to do it. Goddamn. Kinda funny she falls for the old man because she has nothing anymore (Including brains) and not because dick was good.

-The unluckiest husband?: Married the dumbest bitch in town for sure but now he can aim for an actual human being so that's a plus in his life. Imagine if he actually got his wife pregnant the kid would definitively be retarded thanks to her wife genes. If he eventually finds his ex-wife and the old man he can sue them for money, I say that's a pretty nice bonus.

This feels made either by AI or some guy that learned what NTR after he was explained by someone drunk.

Base +6, thicgothgf +5, abrickhouse +6, rikudosennin -6, BZo1480 +6, Enduro +6