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What if Ore no Imouto happened in real life, basically? Really... deep. :o

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Man...this is like a serious worse case scenario.

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Wow, what an emotional roller-coaster this one was. Bit of a tearjerker ending.

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First Imouto work I couldn't fap too.

I found the most amazing thing to be Manami pulling the gun out to be the most eye popping moment. I was like What the hell!? for a few seconds

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wow, ....I feel like I just read School Days that was.....wow

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this artist should just quit hentai and start a mangaka career

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Funny yet also heartbranking. I couldn't fap to it but loved every second of it.

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this one was by far the most impressive doujinshi about ore no imouto that i have read... its quite.. DEEP, and this could have definetly happened in the serie if kyouske wouldt have helped kirino when she needed, her life at the end was fkng sad it pained me to see it O.o

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The artist for this is actually a failed Mangaka, as a result pretty much everything he writes is a brutal deconstruction of other works. His K-on series is pretty fantastic, and his Haruhi stuff is pretty interesting as well.

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Well I wanted something new, and I got it. 5/5

Also, no clue how Kyousuke become a player XD

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I can't fap to this!

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I really like how the author handles the subjekt sex itself and what might happen to teenagers if they get too soon in contact with it. For example, Kyouske in this case was a rather normal young man in the beginning but he soon turned into a heartless beast, which does not care for the feelings of Kuroneko or his childhood friend. It's all just about sex for him, the same goes for his sister too. That's the reason why they got bored of each other quite quickly because they do not share any real feelings for each other. It's kind of a scarry thought, since most of us probably had a rather early contact to eroges or hentais long before we turned 18. Therefore each of us did or has the potential to turn out just like that, given the appropriate environment.

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This is doujin is pretty close to real life.

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As much as I hate that bitch kirino.

The eye. The strap. It got to me.

That end, man.
That. Fucking. End.

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I was ready to use my tissues to clean up, but instead i cried in them instead. First hentai to make me cry, wtf.

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what means the left eye?

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wow that's pretty fucked up

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Wow, I was aroused before I read this. Now I just feel bad. Thank. You. So. Very. Much.

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There's no way my little sister could be that cute.

My erection died that day, my soul crushed under the weathered ink of something to which I could not fap.

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......my love for the anime stopped me from reading this after i saw the comments..thanks.

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This is like that one fatality, where the other guy shows you your heart before crushing it and with all the pain that comes with having you thorax teared open, there is a voice in the back of your head that goes like this is fucking awesome, but I'm going to die right after this.

That is what this work made me feel.

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good story , hate the bad end ,
no fantasy end here , its the realistic end ;__:

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That ending came completely from the left field. Its not even an NTR its just what reality is. (With a grain of salt.).

I'm never gonna look down on brosuke for helping his sis even if she is a bitch at times. Canon Kyousuke knows what he's doing.

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Woah. I only noticed it when I actually searched it up and found it on fakku, but that eye was a sign of her getting beat up and Kyousuke noticed it. It's slightly misaligned after she got attacked in the bar. I think the term for it is traumatic strabismus, not sure though. This is actually really detailed.

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To be honest, the events and the personality of the characters are quite accurate while taking the what if worst ending if changes weren't made.

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Seriously, someone's gotta make a sequel, poorly drawn or not, just to correct that ending.

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Well, I really can't fap to this artists work, but instead end up enjoying the story in a fucked up, depressing kinda way. As a hentai, it fails to turn me on. Maybe it's your thing, but not mine. But as a story, its interesting and his artwork is fab.

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Screw you, Kirino! Nodame Cantabile is a masterpiece.

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Not bad. But not perfect either. Too much Out Of Character.

The Parents - made utterly spineless and helpless. They just ignore possibility of their kids fucking, even though they could confirm their fears, with... listening through the door? In original, mom was overall decent, dad was distant, but caring.
Kirino - way too crazy. Bashing her dads head was way too much, too early for fifth or so page. We should be shown why tsunderish (90% tsun, 10% dere) character goes straight for that.
In original, she had troubles making friends, or going along with her brother, but she was hardworking model, student and athlete. Not typical virtue for spoiled impulsive sociopath she is here.
Impulsive sociopaths become murderers and rapist. Not impulsive ones, politicians and insurance salesmen. She can't be both author, pick one.
Kyosuke - at first, he behaved as he would if placed in crazy situation like this one. Then he went all clueless manwhore. It made sense for him to spend more time at Manamis house, but its just mentioned here once, and then ignored. Real Kyosuke would all cut relationship with his sister earlier - that is even one of endings in PSP game (she acts like bitch, so he ditches her, and hangs out with Saori and Kuroneko instead).
Even if he would have fucked other characters, he wouldn't alienate all of them. Worst I can imagine, is him being player with heart of gold, rather than just douchebag (promiscuous, but actually considerate of his lovers).
Ayase - from moral crusader to complete idiot slut? Really? Given that she is totally crushing on Kirino, if she is made a slut, at least we could be give some girl-girl action.
Kuroneko - barely talks here. No characterization to speak off. But why Kyosuke even knows her and Saori? He meet them by helping Kirino make friends, I don't this This Kirino would even let him.
Saori - only character made more awesome than in original. But also OOC. Sure, she is smart for ditching douchebag Kyosuke becomes here, but real Saori was bit of doormat. I thing she would be too scared of losing one of her only friends, to refuse him that quickly. Maybe she would refuse, maybe not. But not while being so confident about it.
Manami - least OOC here. Real Manami could have dumped This Kyosuke, but only because he is nothing like Original Kyosuke, especialy later in story. Real Manami tried to get with him in game and anime, even after he goes out with Kirino. She wouldn't really believe her slandering him, since she has very bad relationship with her - she would be happy to blame her for everything, she does it in canon. Breaking of their 10 years relationship is too forced - people don't do it that easily (even if its good idea). There should more repeated violations of trust on his part.

That saying, it is good story. It just tries to use characters, that have different personalities that roles this story need.

Author should either use original characters, or make story longer, to realistically show how they over time became more fucked up than in original.

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How it should have ended indeed.

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WOW.
All the crazy bipolar shit going on here can even make PUNCH-RAPING HARUHI LOOK TAME.
Like, DAAAAAAMN.
It's very probable this one doujin will ruin the anime (or OreImo ENTIRELY), once I finally get down to finishing it.

Also, I'm a bit concerned about TK now......meaning, you know the general consensus on how serial killers escalate their actions over time...

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Well then... Why is there suddenly dust in my eyes at the end and why is it that I have such a hard time fapping to this?

Oh and I wish they had a scene at the end where Kyousuke talks to Kirino so the dull throb goes away :|

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Page 40: Alpha as fuck.

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RATATATATATA

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Wow... WOW!
This isn't a hentai I can fap to...

This is unexpected... Yet I kind of liked it...
But the first page made look at this whole series as a conservative version of the history, like if it's trying to prove hentai, porn and etc are bad/corrupting to kids.
Yet I enjoyed seeing bitch Kirino getting punched and raped... (Finally someone punished that little shit!)
When I saw Manami get the gun I was expecting a School Days redo. Yet I liked it...

It clearly seems like of School Days endings got mixed with Oreimo. I kind of liked it anyway.

To me this isn't a great hentai neither a great manga, but it's interesting to see another look at the history after having finished the original history so long ago and having seem several parodies and adaptations.
It isn't awesome to, it seems like a decent anime with an over dramatization and conservative look but still interesting...

I don't wanted to read a single page of it but it was cool to endure until the ending...

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/372927/Ore-to-Imouto-no-200-nichi-Sensou/
RAW: /g/318615/6f4f2e3a12/
Thai Translation: /g/334839/0c204562d4/
Korean Translation: /g/319513/e861e66982/
Chinese Translation: /g/363407/89b5ec8a66/

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Oh crap. Like marc455 said, this could have been me. I was on the path because porn desensitized me to women and their feelings. I managed to pull out of the nosedive at the last second because I became alone, and I wasn't immune to the condescending me. I saw what I did wrong now that I was free, and ever since them I believe my views are exactly as they should be, and more correct than several of my peers.

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This artist is the god of Bad-Ends. A lot of his work are realistic on a conceptual and psychological level of how people will behave but certain extremes are quite unrealistic (like bashing her dad's head with an ash tray). This is more of an accurate portrayal of the future lives of the generic white-trash degenerates that go to public schools with the purpose of hanging out with their mates and to fuck around and do drugs instead of acquiring an education.

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Kanako have good lucky that is out of this shit

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realistic i don't know.... Do you think there is often very violent punk in bar which makes yo go straight to the porn hell if you are not careful with no one calling the cops ? It seems like a bit of a stretch....

And yeah, even if i am REALLY angry with another member of my family, seeing her on a pornographic video, i may be a LITTLE worried about her... Or at least the parents...

So... Hentai logic really.... Not that there is anything wrong with it of course.

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i can't fap to this in the slightest, but damn does the insanity set a high standard for itself and keeps on spiraling

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I still get this feeling of satisfaction: Maybe they all fucked themselves over, but there is still the route of happiness, I mean Kirino's confession at the end may be the key to it. Like, maybe they get yet again together and flee somewhere peacefully and live together to their end, licking their wounds over times and dying old& happy,

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I should have learned to stay away from Takotsuboya, but I keep coming back to him.
I laughed most of the way through, but that interview with Kirino at the end made me tear up more than I should have.

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Fucking laughed when she just suddenly got beaten up in the bar. Too bad about her left eye though, that was messed up

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He did this to himself by cheating :(

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I love Kirino, but i can't deny i enjoyed every page of this. The author did a amazing job inserting real life gone wrongs into it.
Careless parents. Lack of family unity/care. Kids becoming boundaryless, violent. Schoolgirls/boys aiming for degenerate, empty lifestyles acting as if a virginity is something you have to discard as fast as possible and them throw a party bragging about it, or go around popping cherries making yourself proud of leaving young girls hanging thinking you care about them. Too much to name.
Most of us have seen this stuff, nothing new for this or the previous generations, but it's gotten quite bad.

The last few pages got me. While we can blame Kirino for introducing Kyousuke to this lifestyle and helping him lose most of his humanity already, he should still have given her a chance to talk. It's your sister dude, she was gone and now she was asking for help. At least hear her before you decide...

...And then shit peaks insanity. Holy fuck Kyousuke, how can you sit there drinking comfortably watching your sister exposed running naked on the streets, having her model career ruined by a eye trauma from a beating, get fucked by some random and then getting humiliated by that interviewer? All that after you denied her help? Is there any trace of humanity left in you?
I hope he at least went after her after that confession.

Edit: Kirino likely had a breakdown after that trauma, that would be why she asked for counseling again, Kyousuke was (still is) her only hope. There is even a official novel extra chapter that predicts Kirino's life completely falling apart if she loses him.

Last edited on 02 February 2023, 02:28.

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