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Posted:2012-12-10 10:34
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Language:English  
File Size:129.6 MiB
Length:122 pages
Favorited:136 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.42

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Posted on 10 December 2012, 18:28 by:   LineArk    PM
Score +5
Who the fuck talks like this guy writes?
Posted on 10 December 2012, 22:56 by:   gigaroc    PM
Score +7
@LineArk I don't think English is his first language
Posted on 11 December 2012, 09:22 by:   newsbox    PM
Score +8
To bad they just stopped story one.
Posted on 12 December 2012, 05:22 by:   Montaj    PM
Score +7
@Gigaorc, You're right, but this is one of his older works I believe. He's gotten a lot better, still a few grammar errors, but much more 'readable'.

Edit:The first chapter is from a few years ago, chapter 2 was just released* You can see the difference.
Posted on 12 December 2012, 16:27 by:   Mr.White Christmas    PM
Score +7
Hmm..i think I can understand better if the English was a little bit organize...
Posted on 25 October 2015, 19:11 by:   Gizmo8001    PM
Score +11
I wonder how many of the posters are multi-lingual. I see the same comments about his work and once again I think they miss the whole point. I understand that the comments are there to help the artist excel but constant negative remarks without any positive suggestions is counterproductive. As Monaj pointed out, and I agree - this is a earlier work and he is improving.

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