Yessss, here is the first chapter of this brand new serie.

This is also the fruit of my very first commisioned comic and kindly brought to you by GaidenHero !
so please be grateful cause it's thanks to him that you can enjoy this tonight !

As it's a commisioned comic, some new special stuff have been requested and I think can be spotted along the comic ^^

GaidenHero is really aiming for a series but it will only become one if it gets popular...So if you enjoy it, make sure you support it !

Last but not least before letting you enjoy the chapter, please note that this comic contains content which is only suitable for adults - All 3D models in this comic are 18+ years old intended.

Any suggestions, comments and good ideas for improvement will be much appreciated !

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Summary

A dark shadow looms over the light of humanity when a structure known only as the Tower of Sin rises from the depths of the Underground. Within its mysterious walls lie creatures and nightmares that threaten to not only pollute and corrupt the world, but to consume all life into its twisted and dark desires with a fog of sinister malice. Many ninja have said to journey to the tower to test their mantle and destroy what evil waits within, but none have ever returned. As the master of the tower peers forth from his dark and secluded chambers, his eyes pierce the only thing that is able to stand in his way.

A small ninja village, home to the Guardian Ninjas, lays remote and peaceful deep within the mountain forests. These ninjas have fought to maintain the balance of peace and chaos, not just within the world, but in the souls of mankind for generations. Their fame in the ninja world was renowned for the founder and best ninja of the clan slaying the demon within the tower walls centuries ago. As time passed, so did the facts, turning history into legends like bed time stories.

However, with the sudden and looming presence of the tower, the village sends out its best ninja, Aki, to deal with the immeasurable sinful presence. With all she holds dear in her heart, and with the dark desires of the most evil demons in the world waiting within, can Aki slay the dark soul of this structure or will it absorb her into its twisted and deviant soul for all eternity?

Be careful about updating so many times, it would be better to save up a bunch and add them all at once.

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AHA! FINALLY!!!

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Finally! Shinra-kun you are the man!

Good work！ but i guess more detailed corruption process is better？

@shinra-kun thanks for your response! Just thought it's kind of too quick for Aki's new appearance in the last page.

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Arf I'm so sorry for all of those republish...
A massive mistake has been unvoluntary left in the comics and I could not let it like that.

Hopefully, you won't blame me for this nor the comic itself >_<

@Waterlas - Yes a long and detailed corruption is always better ^^
unfortunately, this comic which was suppose to be only 50 pages is now already 100+...

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I immediately thought 'Dead-or-Kombat' upon seeing the emaciated Raiden-looking guy.

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Finally the next chapter in the fallen star saga, can't wait. now on to this story it good reminds me of the fallen star story somewhat.

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this is pretty great, hope u make more

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The Japanese major in me is crying...Sun Long is not a Japanese name. They don't even have an -ng sound.

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I still have no idea why anyone would find a female superhero sexy. Unless they are getting raped, impregnated, transformed, or otherwise dominated. Even then, it's like, why bother? Draw a petite woman. There are enough amazonian defects out there already...

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I hope u updated the Fallen Star ：）

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Ok. That a blonde Katana from Mortal Kombat.

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What a fantastic comic! I look forward to more!

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Is there a scroll 2?

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Will their ever be a chapter 2?! I got to know how it ends. Does the evil wizard ever get defeated? Or gain victory and take over the world? Does the sexy ninja woman ever get rescued? I wanna know what happens next! It's been years!!!

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Hey! GaidenHero here, I commissioned this comic a long time ago from Shinra Kun! I wanted to thank everyone for still giving this a read even 9 years after the release.

So to answer @restlez and @number842650, if I can ever find anyone willing to finish the story, then yes. The initial work was beginning on it when Shinra-Kun unfortunately had to back out for reasons that were of his own. This left me without anyone to finish it, and making comics with this kind of level of talent and artwork is special when you have rare talent like Shinra and G9 comics but is harder to find once you step outside their well skilled hands. Also anyone I approached with the idea wanted a price tag that would require a small fortune which I didn't have access to at the time.

To summarize, yes, the story is actually written and I had another handful of scrolls actually laid out. To answer your questions without revealing too much if I do get back to it, yes and no lol. The story was actually going to delve into the true evil of the tower, who was not the wizard believe it or not, but what lurked below. Corruption was going to be maintained but in a different way, relying on personality and action based changes rather than full blown appearance all the time. Aki's sisters would be up next in scroll 2, but the actual heroine of the story is her sister that kind of looks like Ayane from Tenchu. I can tell you that there is an assault on the tower from the village to save Aki and repel the forces of darkness back, which has interesting causes and effects. Aki's sister is being called to the tower by Aki, almost hauntingly, every night in her dreams she has the same nightmare of succumbing to the evil wizard as well. The village cannot sit by any longer and be picked off, so they launch the assault. A new enemy was introduced, who acted and looked like oogie boogie from Nightmare Before Christmas, We can all guess his style of corruption.

It would climax over into scroll 3, where the village is seen to be getting overrun after the events in scroll 2 go south. I can tell you that a little more lore to the story is dumped and the head lady would have been the girl of sexy corruption in that, but also it is where things would have taken a big twist. The tower exists beyond space and time, it is something that is a manifestation, not so much a physical construct as we know, much like Castle of Dracula in Castlevania. Using her powers, she seals the entire village and tower in a time pocket seal, where nothing ages inside yet time passes regularly outside. Aki's sister is also sealed from the forces in the village to keep her safe. The story would pick up in modern times, where the village and tower reappear after the spell wears off. The residents of the tower and village are long corrupted, all except one, Aki's sister, who is also thrusted out of her seal. This brings awe to the modern people, who thought this village had vanished without a trace from all history records. It is there a archeologist finds Aki's sister and takes her to get medical help and looked over. Meanwhile, Aki and the tower paterons begin a plan to slowly corrupt the world around them by infiltrating the highest of authorities. Corporations, government seats of power, shady gangs, all forming a secret cult. We see the two corruption styles here, they can look human and normal when engaging with people outside, but they can always revert in and out of their corrupted states.

The next scrolls all take place as Aki's sister combats and runs from the ever growing cult, and the story takes on an Indiana Jones mixed with HP Lovecraft as the bloodline of Aki's family is explored, the tower's origin, and the true evil that resides beneath it, a concept that would explore what true corruption and evil really were, even before we had labels for them. Sadly, right now I don't have a clear path forward to actually creating the art but, I do have the story so when I find a way, the scrolls shall be returning :)

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Thanks for the reply GaidenHero , maybe one day....

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Honestly, I am very open to continuing this. If anyone has a good reference to a trustworthy source that would be willing to continue this and work with me that won't run me $1000's of dollars I am open to work on it again. I just need to find an artist who does good DAZ work and will be willing to put in the same level of quality. I am actively trying to seek someone and if I can find that person and work a good deal, Yoru 2 will happen. I even considered if I should go anime style, but I think the DAZ style fits this kinda thing more.

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Would you be willing for someone to continue it even with another lower quality graphic engine?

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Happy 10 year aniversery. Sucks that theirs still no sequel. Guess the evil wizard guy won and has that hot sexy blonde ninja girl to himself. Lucky him. Lol

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