Re-edit based off of CGRascal's translation (/g/578298/6ff429f7fa/). Corrected the grammatical errors, did some slight cleaning and improved the typesetting. Slightly changed around the Dialogue to make it flow better.

Seems that I completely misinterpreted the term "rewrite". Before we have a Shitstorm like last time, no I did not change the dialogue to make a completely different story. I applaud CGrascal and his efforts but honestly (and you all know it) his/her translation is pretty bad. All I did was fix the dialogue to better suit the the manga.

Also, I decided to drop the honorifics. if you guys don't like it, I can always go back over it and change it, no biggie.

Ain't trying to preach or anything, just trying to make this place a little bit better. How about next time you read the fucking thing before you judge.

cleaning, typesetting done by Anonymous, love you /a/.

Oh, forgot to mention. Anything you don't like, anything I'm doing wrong or any blatant mistakes I made, let me know. Still fairly new to this type of thing.

Fucking amazing.

Can you put this together with the other chapters? I can't stand CGrascal.

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a story with a lol plot doesn't need a good translation anyway. you're wasting your efforts, man...

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I think doing a "complete" thing would be best in the end as it'll enable the first chapter avoiding the shitstorm (and re-write tag) attached to it.

Reading before juding? That's crazy talk to the ignorant taggers who would tag an petite adult woman "lolicon"

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Dude thanks for translating this into competent English. Too many people post literal translations from the original Japanese, it's nice to see some appropriate grammar

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爆豪是你！！！

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