Thanks for the release!
Typo p37, panel 2, bubble 2: Let's NOT...
Otherwise, great doujin, Maya-sama is super cool and Choukai is cute as always.

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also pg 02, I don't know if was because should be if it was
pg 12, cearly should be clearly
pg 15, wierd should be weird (is misspelled twice)
pg 17 Looks like normal movement no issues either should be movements have no issues either
pg 23 start moving should be started moving
pg 33 bodeis should be bodies. and You played as me played should be a comma, you played as me, played
pg 36 I told you, you won't understand should be wouldn't. and But your so sly should be you are so sly
pg 44, Because if was I wasn't there should be Because if I wasn't there (has was twice).
It was a patch up this missing thing? (I have no idea about this sentence).

these are the errors I noticed.

Last edited on 15 July 2016, 10:37.

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Good lord that is A LOT. But thanks @mutopis for spotting out the errors would edit asap

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pg 17 Looks like normal movement no issues either I misspoke, should be have not has.
pg 23, My limbs move on their own like long before move all on their own I am not sure what to make of this sentence.
pg 34, What are you planning to do should be were you planning

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Anotha one
thankies!

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I re-read it, I think I got them all. Maybe someone should re-check on it to make sure on the QC.

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You can't fool big sisters Takao and Atago.

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pg 42, If it were really Maya should be was not were. Some of the sentences are a bit weird but seems passable. I suggest to get help from 4chan /a/ in the Kancolle thread or from Yuriproject board for QC. If you can.

Base +6, fjdkslaa -6

Thanks, ucoffeew, good work as always

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