Since i saw sky's release i thought i'll share mine too,i want to translate/reedit the whole tank but im pretty short on time
so atleast i can give you the first 2 chapters.

English translations of the first 2 chapters from /g/938677/c2024b4b54/

Japanese Raw:/g/938677/c2024b4b54/ by Hentaicore
Korean: /g/940243/343b2dd649/
Chinese: /g/943448/169ab5c366/

Toranoana: https://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/20/0011/64/96/200011649647.html
Melonbooks: https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=158947

Artist Related:
Artist: kiasa(kiasa)
Circle: Jyouren Kishidan(ジョウ・レン騎士団)

Web:
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=5643748
https://twitter.com/kiasa_R18
http://blog.livedoor.jp/ishiihiromasa58-jyouren/

Criticism is welcome

Enjoy

How many chapters does this story have in total?

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I like title that goes straight to the point, NTRism.
Bye guys

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Thanks for the translation.

@Templa There are two more chapters I think. The next chapter is already translated, it's this one /g/617238/be4da51450/.

Then there's a final chapter. It has an okay conclusion imo for an NTR title.

Last edited on 27 July 2016, 19:02.

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Thanks for the translation.
A lot of this tank seems to have been translated piecemeal already. Would be nice to see the whole thing.
Drive your nightmare, Yamitsuki, Ayataka, and 72(by CGR though so feel free to redo it).

Last edited on 27 July 2016, 20:26.

Base +12, StealthyJarl +2, Ooe Kintarou +5, Lostalgia +6, Miriah +7, Buraku-chan +10, wowz098 +9, Mr.Pencil +7, Calicko +5, jfragrettel +7

Megane-kun wins (ish) in the end. Although I'm a bit disappointed because in "Drive Your Nightmare" the NTRguy didn't seem like such a bad dude as he comes off in this. I always sorta assumed that megane-kun just lost in the end because he's a betaboy megane-kun and no girl would ever possibly be interested in him.

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Oh, so this is where that other chapter from the van came from.
Pretty nice.

Base +6, Ooe Kintarou +5, Miriah +7, jfragrettel +7

guess the one shot was popular to get multi chapters.

Base +7, Ooe Kintarou +5, jfragrettel +7

@Templa:

Four.

Base +6, Ooe Kintarou +5, Miriah +7, jfragrettel +7

Kiasa tank?? AWWWWWWWW YEAHHHHHHHh

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Is this actually netorare? Do people actually feel bad for the other guy? This girl is dumb beyond redemption, there's nothing to lose. I can understand if you are a slut and prefer his cock over the other's but she didn't even fuck with the other guy...

edit: Nevermind, NTR tag makes sense if you take into consideration the other chapters. She is still a dumb bitch regardless.

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Let that be a lesson: when you rape a girl, she's gonna want it eventually.

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I don't know why, but I feel like this will have only ntr.

Base +7, Calicko -5

Why is she even wearing that necklace? -.- If only authors paid as much attention to the story as they pay to the art, ntr genre would be great, but nope.

Ppl downvoting me for stating the truth, fantastic. I'm not hating ntr in general, if anything i don't like (not hating) because authors in general concetrate on art while story is left just like here. It may be passable if its 1 chapter long story, but if it's a few chapters then come on. And please don't get me on how this is porn and shouldn't have any plot whatsoever.

Last edited on 28 July 2016, 22:52.

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So we're in agreement the heroine is hopelessly dumb? Fantastic.

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Kiasa's girls always look delicious!

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oh wow reading the 3rd chapter a long time ago i had no idea it was part of something more, this is great, thank you for the hard work!

Base +6, Ooe Kintarou +5, Miriah +7, jfragrettel +7

Oh si puro NTR me encanta gracias por subirlo.

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cuck garbage. Subhumans at it again

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Thanks for the translation hope to see the other chapters.

In the end the Heroine WON here. She got married to her Love of his Life and have a living dildo in the side. =)

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man i just loooooove how butthurt people get over ntr, its fucking hilarious

Base +6, Wilfriback -13, RaizelX -6, AnimeLUZ -9, Tiring -6, Calicko +5, Limited +8, bucetinhasagrada -6

Women are stupid. Just accept it. Don't be mad

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It's too bad... The six pages prologue of chapter 3 isn't translated. See here : /s/5265b0216a/938677-54
And chapters 4-5 still to be translated too. I can't wait. Thanks a lot for your work !

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I don't know anything about this NTR shit people are talking about, but I'd murder any guy who would actually do this IRL.

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well with this we at least realize that A. The best friend was a scum bag from day one and B. the girl had already been broken by the time drive your nightmare came around at this point .
Sucks for glasses dude who's got nothing but a beta man future ahead of him.

Base +6, Ooe Kintarou +5, Miriah +7, jfragrettel +7

Looking forward to the rest of the translation, this story has a pretty based ending where Satoshi actually wins and NTRs Shou that still thinks owns the place, meanwhile Hinata and Satoshi get married and betray Shou behind his back by having mad revenge sex everytime he pathetically fucks Hinata, absolutely glorious.

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Dat smile on top left of pg.50

*woman at bar* "Ohhh I just broke up with my boyfriend and i'm so drunk right now"
*every guy, and a few lesbians, in bar* D

"Today I turn 18!"
D

[for the lolicons]
"I can't find my mommy, will you help me?"
D

Base +10, Undeadcynic97 -7, poopyface -6, SleepoT -4

@elfagian Thats not how it ends, we don't even see them getting married, after finishing school they move in together and Shou continues to fuck Hinata whenever he likes and even impregnates her, Hinata has sex with Satoshi right afterwards so that the doesn't get suspicious. There is no revenge sex or some shit. Shou gets to fuck Hinata whenever he wants in addition to the other girlls he fucks on the side, Satoshi is stuck with Hinata and he is raising Shou's baby with her. Guess again who won at the end.

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so.... will someone please complete the rest of the tank?

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@elfagian I think you invented a different story in your head. Unfortunately this is not a story that happens to have NTR in it, this is a story all about the NTR. Satoshi is the loser here because their relationship isn't even secure as Hinata is going to keep getting raped by Shou. She only wanted to have sex with Satoshi to try and hide the fact Shou has fucked her raw on an unsafe day. But I think Satoshi's narration and the face he's making hints that he's aware of what happened. Some people can only get off on smashing and stepping on other's relationships...

One page 41, I like the detail that HInata's sock got pulled off too when Shou stripped her panties off. So she only has one sock on for the next couple of pages. It's just sad that these little details are cursed by being from NTR artists in their NTR stories.

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